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Confusion

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Cuddlez
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0 posted 01-27-2000 08:12 PM       View Profile for Cuddlez   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Cuddlez

Confusion

Constantly groping to understand your thoughts
Outwardly calm and hating you
Never showing the real inside
Fighting the way I feel
Understanding I can't change it
Simple conversations with complex meanings
Inwardly seething with hurt
Obstinately refusing to accept what I know
Never understanding or accepting anything

In one word: CONFUSION


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hoot_owl_rn
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Oh, that's a hard place to be  

 I can live with the idea
That we are merely actors
Playing a part
But I do wish
Whoever is writing my script
Would learn to use
A few more Happy Endings
~Javan
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I feel that way sometimes to.
Great work!!!!!
G. A. Webb
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There's a person I thought of when I read this and I cal totally relate. Good job.

G
Cuddlez
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Thanks.... anyone have suggestions on improvements or additions that can be made?

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