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0 posted 01-27-2000 07:04 PM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for SEA


Do you see me
looking at you
What's next?
What should I do?

Wave-
Now wink,
it's part of the game
But hey-
What is his name?

Smile-
say hi
Wait-
Who is this guy?

Who is he?
What should I do?
He's so handsome
I haven't a clue!
-SEA-

*I wrote this just for fun  
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1 posted 01-28-2000 12:51 AM       View Profile for bsquirrel   Email bsquirrel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for bsquirrel

And it shows. Brought a smile to my face, anyway! I love work as unpretentious and simply out for a good time as this. Many times, people take themselves way to seriously, and mistake their art for Art. One capitalization does not make any significant change. (that's why I always lower-case my poems; to remind myself that no matter how great I think the words I've paired together are, they're merely words, not life. even the most expressive writing in the world fails actual reality). Thanks for sharing.

Mike
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Mike.....glad to give you a smile!   I'm glad you liked it. -SEA
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3 posted 01-28-2000 02:50 AM       View Profile for devina   Email devina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for devina

So this is how it's done huh??? LOL! Cute poem SEA!

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SEA-
This is an adorably flirtatious piece.
Spontaneity is fun !
So is flirting !
~*Marge*~


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This shows the fun you had in writing it! I like it, Sea!
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This is a cute one, SEA! I love it!!
 
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