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Moment With You

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PoeticKnight
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New Orleans, LA


0 posted 01-27-2000 05:03 PM       View Profile for PoeticKnight   Email PoeticKnight   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for PoeticKnight

Sometimes in the dark like this
I get a desire for you like this
Want to feel, want to feel your kiss
Donít want to lose out on so much bliss

Things I need to learn so much
Have to feel, to feel your touch
Never will it be too much
Gracing me with your saving touch

With you I know all
With you when darkness falls
I donít heed anyone elseís call
Time to stop, time to end it all

I need to stop it fast
Need to make this moment last

(Sorry for the close posts, but they are kind of companion pieces)

© Copyright 2000 J.M. Landry - All Rights Reserved
Corinne
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since 10-28-1999
Posts 5247
state of confusion


1 posted 01-27-2000 05:10 PM       View Profile for Corinne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Corinne

Very passionate, my kind of poetry here!


Corinne
PoeticKnight
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2 posted 01-27-2000 05:21 PM       View Profile for PoeticKnight   Email PoeticKnight   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for PoeticKnight

Thank you so much, more are coming...
devina
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3 posted 01-27-2000 05:33 PM       View Profile for devina   Email devina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for devina

So warm and tender, we are now overbound with romantics!!!

 Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...
tracie66
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Victoria, Australia


4 posted 01-28-2000 04:33 AM       View Profile for tracie66   Email tracie66   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit tracie66's Home Page   View IP for tracie66

Beautiful.. My kind of poetry to. Excellent piece  
Janet Marie
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5 posted 03-14-2000 09:14 PM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

Sometimes in the dark like this
I get a desire for you like this
Want to feel, want to feel your kiss
Donít want to lose out on so much bliss
Things I need to learn so much
Have to feel, to feel your touch
Never will it be too much
Gracing me with your saving touch

BIG SIGH
oh man...what I wouldnt give...to have a poem like this written for me...
can i rent you out for awhile
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