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In Time

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Kid Pedestal
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In Time




In times when my hollowed earth
Made the trees sing songs of ecstasy,
I stood strong, open, and alive.
And here I stand now, alone
Bending the wind with my thoughts,
And making my dreams become physical.
I felt all was against me,
So I reopened the door of
My soul to the everlasting.
I shared my mind,
Explained my ways,
And he understands.
He knows where my temple is...
And I have believed so for years.
Only now I realize what I've done...
And now I am one.
Kid Pedestal


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HelmutB
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Sounds like soul searching to me
But done in a very good form of poerty
I enjoyed this piece

 The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools.

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