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More Then Any Other Day

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Lucie
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since 06-20-99
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0 posted 01-27-2000 03:43 PM       View Profile for Lucie   Email Lucie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Lucie

I watched the clock tick closer to our Anniversary.
Sitting in the dark alone I wished you here with me.
I saw you there beside me with a smile on your face.
Imagining you happy and not in that awful place.

I told you that Iím happy that I belong to you.
Told you that I miss you and that I love you too.
The tears came as expected when I realized Iím alone.
And that it will be several months before you can come home.

I watched the time slip slowly past as night turned into day.
Watching as the living room turned from black to gray.
I never left that stupid chair except to run and see.
If you had sent a letter saying Happy Anniversary.

But the mailbox, it was empty, much as I am feeling now.
Trying hard to understand and cope with this somehow.
I guess I didnít stop to think how hard this year would be.
To be a married woman with no husband next to me.

And as I sit and watch the day turn slowly into night.
I lean back in this stupid chair and pull you into sight.
Today more then any other day I needed words from you.
To hear you say your glad Iím yours and that you love me too.

I sit and watch the clock tick toward the closing of the day
I watch the room change from light and fade to lonesome gray.
I let the teardrops fall once more and drown my misery.
And whisper to the darkened roomÖ Happy Anniversary.

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Kid Pedestal
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since 01-04-2000
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Chandler, Arizona


1 posted 01-27-2000 03:50 PM       View Profile for Kid Pedestal   Email Kid Pedestal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Kid Pedestal's Home Page   View IP for Kid Pedestal

I cannot express the feeling inside me from reading this...

I only wish I had the power to help you...



 
LngJhnAg
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since 07-23-99
Posts 3654
Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion


2 posted 01-27-2000 04:00 PM       View Profile for LngJhnAg   Email LngJhnAg   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for LngJhnAg

Lucie

Man, this is one tough poem.  I'm just a man, and so I don't always appreciate how much it means to a woman when it comes to little expressions of love.  I feel guilty for your husband because we are both men, and I might forget someday to be more sensitive to the feelings of the wonderful woman who allows me to call her my own.  This poem reminds me that I am truly blessed to have a loving woman.  I hope your man will realize the same thing and try to make amends for this bittersweet day.

[This message has been edited by LngJhnAg (edited 01-27-2000).]
SEA
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with you


3 posted 01-27-2000 04:16 PM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SEA

Lucie, you are an excellent writer! Your words made me feel as though it was happening to me. You brought tears to my eyes. This is so sad. I hope things are better for you. -SEA
Marilyn
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since 09-26-1999
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4 posted 01-27-2000 06:42 PM       View Profile for Marilyn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Marilyn

Oh Lucie..I have no words. ((((HUG))))
suthern
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on the threshold of a dream


5 posted 01-27-2000 07:07 PM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

Awww, Lucie... I know there's nothing we can say that will make up for what he didn't say or make your day less bleak... but these long months will end... Big hugs... and kudos for powerful writing!!!
hoot_owl_rn
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since 07-05-99
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Glen Hope, PA USA


6 posted 01-28-2000 12:38 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Oh Lucie...I just got done reading your very funny one and now this...so sad  
Toerag
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since 07-29-99
Posts 5839
Ala bam a


7 posted 01-28-2000 09:16 AM       View Profile for Toerag   Email Toerag   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Toerag

Lucie...this is very touching....and so well written....I hope you mailed it to him......
Sometimes guys just don't think.....(well, 'cept for me and LongJohn anyway)..about those important days and such......I need to do something or write something ta make ya smile I think.......Lemme see what I can do.....
Poet deVine
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Hurricane Alley


8 posted 01-30-2000 09:44 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Sweetie..it won't be long now...you'll have him home with you...don't worry about the words..just the feelings..and I'm sure he was holding you in his heart on your anniversary just as you were holding him.  
Denise
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9 posted 01-30-2000 11:44 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Oh, Lucie, I'm sorry for your pain. Such a heartbreaking poem. Pretty soon you'll be together again. Hang in there. And remember we're all here for ya!

Love
Denise
WhtDove
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since 07-22-99
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Illinois


10 posted 01-31-2000 12:00 AM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

*sniff, sniff*  You sure brought this to life for me! How sad, and I can remember a time feeling this way!  And Happy Anniversary Lucie! Even though he wasn't there with you, I hope he returns soon!
 
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