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Will the Sun Rise?

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PoeticKnight
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0 posted 01-27-2000 12:32 PM       View Profile for PoeticKnight   Email PoeticKnight   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for PoeticKnight

With the passage of time
Comes the deepening of love
Like the darkening day
In the setting of the sun
Changing shades of colored sky
All fading to blackest night
Holding steady, all feelings the same
Constantly avoiding the light

But she, in my arms remains
As the blissful sleep enfolds me
I trust my soul to her
So in the morning I might see
And behold all that I am
With an opening of her waking eyes
After a night like this I wonder,
Will the sun ever rise?


© Copyright 2000 J.M. Landry - All Rights Reserved
kitkat
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1 posted 01-27-2000 01:12 PM       View Profile for kitkat   Email kitkat   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for kitkat

JML- yes the sun will rise again. Love your poetry. you have a way with words.

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You got to get up every morning with a smile on your face
and show the world all the love in your heart
Then people are gonna treat you better
You're gonna find, yes you will
That your beautiful as you feel.~~~ Carol King


devina
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2 posted 01-27-2000 01:14 PM       View Profile for devina   Email devina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for devina

Beautifully romantic!!!! Your words ar full of meaning!!

 Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...
hoot_owl_rn
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Wonderfully romantic  
tracie66
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4 posted 01-27-2000 07:29 PM       View Profile for tracie66   Email tracie66   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit tracie66's Home Page   View IP for tracie66

Loved your poem, very romantic
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Skyfyre
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5 posted 01-27-2000 08:48 PM       View Profile for Skyfyre   Email Skyfyre   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Skyfyre

Ah, but I think in this case the more pertinent question is -- would you want it to?

Tender and lovely -- a wonderful read.

--Kess


 Full fathom five thy father lies,
Of his bones are coral made,
Those are pearls that were his eyes;
Nothing of him that doth fade
But doth suffer a sea-change
Into something rich and strange...


--William Shakespeare, from The Tempest

PoeticKnight
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6 posted 01-28-2000 09:53 AM       View Profile for PoeticKnight   Email PoeticKnight   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for PoeticKnight

Skyfyre, high praise indeed from you. Plus an interesting question, and i think the answer here would be NO.
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