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Don't wait till we go wrong

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vandana
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0 posted 01-27-2000 11:13 AM       View Profile for vandana   Email vandana   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for vandana


Don't,
Don't wait till we go wrong,
For any reason,
We do for anything,
Your heart can hold
For the moment,
you're waiting for,
You should see first,
Then wait till we go wrong,

Don't loose your ways,
Where you're leading to,
Don't loose your heart,
If you wouldn't find
what you're searching for,
Don't wait for
what we're going through,

Wait till the morning comes,
When morning rains starts,
All over again,
You don't know
how the night's can grow longer,
Till we find pieces of hearts
on the floor,
So don't wait till we go wrong,

Let's hold for the moment
you have been waiting for,
Let's hold our breathes,
Till we find the right way,
To walk our souls to the top
of the world,
Don't wait till we go wrong,


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Denise
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1 posted 01-27-2000 11:17 AM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

'To walk our souls to the top of the world'

I love that!! Lovely thoughts and sentiments in this, Vandana!  
Elizabeth Santos
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2 posted 01-27-2000 11:25 AM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

Lovely, lovely verse, vanana,
Your thoughts sometimes are very echanting.
Liz
Mike
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3 posted 01-27-2000 11:47 AM       View Profile for Mike   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mike

another nice one Vandana...  enjoyed.
WhtDove
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4 posted 02-05-2000 09:45 AM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

This really hit home today!

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When you can't make up your mind
Which way is right for you,
Stop and softly ask yourself,
What Would Jesus Do?
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