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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 01-27-2000 10:26 AM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Seymour Tabin


          Heavens Vessel

Over the bridge of a rainbow,
Tarrying in greeneries meadow.
We hear the bells of past in chime,
Pealing from another time.

In waves of serendipity,
From knolls of past humanity.
The sands and dust of former ties
And remnants of some last goodbyes.

It's here the waters flow like tears,
From happiness, or sad, or fears.
It's here forgiveness turns to fate
And here commitments rain to late.

All things are laid in common dust
And all depends on common trust.
It is the life of greenery.
It is, what grew the Adam Tree.

It is the focus and a flow,
Of everything that we know.
It is the beginning and end.
It is the bowl the soul my friend.

So dream your meadow of the greens.
And walk the rainbow to your dreams.
© Copyright 2000 Seymour Tabin - All Rights Reserved
Danny Holloway
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1 posted 01-27-2000 10:31 AM       View Profile for Danny Holloway   Email Danny Holloway   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Danny Holloway

One of the better poems I have read.
Excellent work!
DH

 
Elizabeth Santos
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2 posted 01-27-2000 11:04 AM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

Sy,
I don't have words for this, it's so beautiful.
You have written a wealth of treasured poems of late, and this is another
Love ya
Liz
Parker
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... the old black rum


3 posted 01-27-2000 12:18 PM       View Profile for Parker   Email Parker   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Parker's Home Page   View IP for Parker

Seymour, very interesting poem, one that I can enjoy reading many times.

Parker
HelmutB
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4 posted 01-27-2000 12:57 PM       View Profile for HelmutB   Email HelmutB   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit HelmutB's Home Page   View IP for HelmutB

The master did it again
When will he write the next one, when
I can see literally the meadow and the 'bow
You have painted such a picturesque show
The dream is in it for that I'm in so deep
The only problem is...to find the time to sleep  


 The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools.

devina
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5 posted 01-27-2000 01:30 PM       View Profile for devina   Email devina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for devina

You've painted this picture well Sy, of course I'd expect nothing less than brilliant from you!!!

 Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...
Elizabeth
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6 posted 01-27-2000 01:34 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth   Email Elizabeth   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Elizabeth's Home Page   View IP for Elizabeth

You really know how to paint with words! I loved the phrase "It's here that water flows like tears, From happiness, or sad, or fears." Well done again.

Elizabeth

 "He have his goodness now. God forbid I take it from him!"
-The Crucible

Sunshine
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7 posted 01-27-2000 04:10 PM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine

"All things are laid in common dust
And all depends on common trust."

These are some of the truest words I have seen written in a long time.  You have found what I have been looking for, I am glad you took the time to put it to pen.  Well done, my friend.


 Sunshine
Look, then, into thine heart, and write ~~~ Henry Wadsworth Longfellow


Seymour Tabin
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8 posted 01-28-2000 10:33 AM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Danny, Thank you for the excellent.

Elizabeth, I love sweets, thank you. Love Sy

Haleyja, Thank you so much.

Helmut, Beautiful comment, thank you.

Devina, You are a sweet dear, thank you.

Liz, Thank you for the well done.

Sunshine, You picked out the meat and I hope you enjoyed the gravy *L* Sy
Denise
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9 posted 01-28-2000 06:09 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Soooooo beautiful, Seymour! Your words are never a disappointment!  

Denise
Nan
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10 posted 01-28-2000 10:01 PM       View Profile for Nan   Email Nan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nan's Home Page   View IP for Nan

I'm walking my rainbows, Sy...
Balladeer
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11 posted 01-28-2000 10:08 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

Another excellent effort, Sy.
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with you


12 posted 01-28-2000 10:16 PM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SEA

Seymour, you made me feel full of hopes and dreams. This is so great!   -SEA
Seymour Tabin
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13 posted 01-28-2000 10:58 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Denise, thank you for the sooo beautiful *L*

Nan, I know you are. *L* Sy

Balladeer, Thank you my friend.

Sea, Thank you so much, wonderful comment.
 
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