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elessar
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since 01-24-2000
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0 posted 01-27-2000 09:25 AM       View Profile for elessar   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for elessar

to you i am just a friend
and this i do not want to end
i want it to grow into something bigger
but how to do this i can not figure
our friendship is something i want to keep
but without you as mine i cannot sleep
i lie awake and think of what it would be like
to have you as mine for just one night
to show you i care about you more than others
to show you how beatiful we could be as lovers
id do anything at all just to be with you
id climb the higest mountain to be with you
id dive to the deepest depths to be with you
id be myself, just to be with you

as you may be able to tell from this and my first poem i have strong feelings for someone, who does not know, and i fear telling for fear of losing a good friendship which has helped me through other hard times, yet if she felt the same way i would be completed...quite a dilemma, perhaps i will just go with what my heart says
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hoot_owl_rn
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since 07-05-99
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1 posted 01-27-2000 10:31 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Welcome to passions  

 I can live with the idea
That we are merely actors
Playing a part
But I do wish
Whoever is writing my script
Would learn to use
A few more Happy Endings
~Javan
Denise
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2 posted 01-27-2000 11:02 AM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

The heart is usually a good place to begin...and if she doesn't feel the same for you as you feel for her, that wouldn't necessarily mean the end of the friendship...and from experience I can tell you that no other person should be your completeness....that has to come from withing yourself.....neediness can tend to drive people away...the last thing that you would want. Very nice poem!

 
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