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Red eclipses the means to your end...

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The Jackal
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0 posted 01-27-2000 02:22 AM       View Profile for The Jackal   Email The Jackal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for The Jackal

ive bled a line or two for you
it goes and comes
red eclipses and combines
with life
to make them want the reject
with no feeling too
siding with all the hateful things
just to prove the means to an end
the open daggers..my insides exposed
can be your meaningless excuse..
and your only friend

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devina
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1 posted 01-27-2000 03:31 AM       View Profile for devina   Email devina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for devina

Very deep thoughts here my friend!!

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There is much power in your words Jackal
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I agree, powerful and painful.

Denise
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