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I will ALWAYS love you!

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tulip
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0 posted 01-27-2000 02:04 AM       View Profile for tulip   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for tulip

I hope one day, you'll understand.
I had to let you go.
You won't return from school today
the memories all I know.

You grew each day, alot sometimes,
you always were so tall.
The strength you have, I hope you learn
to reach instead of fall.

I know you'll ask, what came of me,
I hope we stay intact.
You are a guide to me sometimes,
of truth, and honest acts.

Your stubborness is hard to guide,
you put me through some tests.
But you show ten times the love,
your honors very set.

I'll always love you in my heart,
I hope you'll always know,
To reach your arms around yourself
each time it doesn't show.


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1 posted 01-27-2000 06:23 PM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SEA

Tulip...... I didn't quite understand what this is about......It made me feel so sad....Could you please explain it to me? I thought it was really good, but if I understood it I think I could appricate it better! Thanks- SEA
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2 posted 01-27-2000 07:34 PM       View Profile for HelmutB   Email HelmutB   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit HelmutB's Home Page   View IP for HelmutB

Sad indeed but a nice poem. Thank you for sharing

 The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools.

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Sea,
I have a son (step-son), and I'm recently divorced.  They just moved to the opposite side of the country.  I've raised him since he was basically born, now he's 9.  It's extremely hard to let him go.  It was my choice to get divorced, and I stayed for many years ONLY because of him.  I finally couldn't do it any longer.

Helmut,
Thank you.
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4 posted 01-27-2000 11:14 PM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SEA

Tulip, thank you for sharing that with me. I'm so very sorry. I can't imagine how hard that must be. I hope you still get to stay in contact with him. I have two step-daughters and my son, and I couldn't imagine them not being in my life. Again, thank you for sharing with me. -SEA
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5 posted 01-29-2000 03:33 AM       View Profile for tulip   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for tulip

Sea,
Thank you...I think the hardest thing right now is knowing my son can't understand.  I hope he does one day, and I am staying in touch with him...but it is EXTREMELY difficult.
 
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