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kaleidoscope
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since 2000-01-10
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0 posted 2000-01-26 11:56 PM


Sleep well, my loved one, wherever you are -
I’ve waited ‘til dawn for your coming;
The babies have slept softly all night long,
And I lie here alone while you’re roaming.

I love you, my darling, and I always will -
It’s easier when you’re not tied here ...
For I can’t be angry when you go away,
But I miss you when you don’t abide here.

You must be asleep somewhere, sweetheart, by now -
I won’t break my heart over you longer -
I’ll cuddle your pillow and wish you sweet dreams,
And I’ll pray that your love will grow stronger.

When I see your sweet face again at my door -
I know it will set my heart leaping ...
There’s joy in just seeing you - thrill in each kiss,
And each moment with you is worth keeping.

So I’ll tarry a while - be content with your smile,
And I won’t expect more than I’m getting;
Though sometimes it’s terribly lonely and hard,
Still the sun of my love won’t be setting.

© Copyright 2000 kaleidoscope - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2000-01-27 12:24 PM


You should expect more. Very nicely writen.- SEA
lucky
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since 2000-01-17
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2 posted 2000-01-27 12:37 PM


What a wonderful heart, who could ask for anything more than this.

lucky

Denise
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3 posted 2000-01-27 11:11 AM


You should definitely expect more......well written, though!

Denise

Burke
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since 2000-01-27
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4 posted 2000-01-27 11:41 AM


I respect that you love a person that much,
I can also really relate to your writing.
thank you for sharing.

                    Burke


Parker
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since 2000-01-06
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5 posted 2000-01-27 12:11 PM


Kaleidoscope, very nice poem. I must agree with the ladies, expect more for your love. There is someone who will love you more.
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