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Why do you hurt me?

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CrazyChick
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0 posted 01-26-2000 11:54 PM       View Profile for CrazyChick   Email CrazyChick   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for CrazyChick

     Why do you hurt me?

I love you more than I ever thought possible
But I don't know why?
I'm not stupid
I know the way you treat me is wrong
But I still care for you
I want to help you
I know your hurting inside
And I want to make all that pain go away
I want to feel safe in your arms
but....
I'm terrified of you
You hurt me and made me cry
You took away so much of my pride
You left me feeling so cold and empty inside

I love you so much...Why do you keep hurting me???
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1 posted 01-27-2000 12:20 AM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SEA

CrazyChick, Hi! I read your poem and felt so sad......If he is treating you bad,HE DOES NOT LOVE YOU! Love is not supposed to hurt! I hope you get out...and fast! You write very well. -SEA
One Who Understands
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2 posted 01-27-2000 01:11 AM       View Profile for One Who Understands   Email One Who Understands   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for One Who Understands

Have you asked him?
One Who Understands
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3 posted 01-27-2000 01:12 AM       View Profile for One Who Understands   Email One Who Understands   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for One Who Understands

And has he answered you?
devina
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4 posted 01-27-2000 01:14 AM       View Profile for devina   Email devina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for devina

Love and someone needing mothering and sympathy are two different things...by the pain of your poem, I say fly sweetie...life's too short to not be happy!!!HUGS!

 Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...
tulip
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5 posted 01-27-2000 02:30 AM       View Profile for tulip   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for tulip

I have to agree with these guys.  Love doesn't hurt the way that you describe it.  Get out before you get hurt any more.  You deserve to be happy!!!
hoot_owl_rn
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6 posted 01-27-2000 10:42 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Love shouldn't hurt crazy chick  
CrazyChick
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7 posted 01-27-2000 11:59 PM       View Profile for CrazyChick   Email CrazyChick   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for CrazyChick

Thank you all for your replys.  
I have left, but its still hard.
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8 posted 01-28-2000 01:00 AM       View Profile for bsquirrel   Email bsquirrel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for bsquirrel

Hi, CrazyChick. A poem very close to my heart reminding me of the tubs of messed up kids I got to know (and be scared of) when I was very, very young and my mom was a foster parent. Hence why I moved far, far away.

Anyway, you did the right thing in leaving. People always gravitate toward the familiar, because, even when it hurts, it's what they know -- and therefore, strangely, it's comforting. That's why so many abused women keep on getting into abusive relationships. Why men usually marry women like their mothers, etc. The only way to break that cycle is to get into therapy. I know it helped me keep away from continuing any chaos in my life. Enjoy life for your own reasons, not some screwed up past that you're living again and again. And by the way, I know my words are strong, but I don't apologize -- I've seen too much, and know that a slap in the face is usually the only way to realize what you're doing to yourself.

Because I care,

Mike
CrazyChick
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9 posted 01-28-2000 01:19 AM       View Profile for CrazyChick   Email CrazyChick   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for CrazyChick

Thank you Mike    
Nate Dogg
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10 posted 01-29-2000 12:53 PM       View Profile for Nate Dogg   Email Nate Dogg   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nate Dogg's Home Page   View IP for Nate Dogg

This is a sad and painful piece. Good job, crazychick!

 Nathan
CrazyChick
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11 posted 01-29-2000 07:46 PM       View Profile for CrazyChick   Email CrazyChick   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for CrazyChick

Thank you Nathan!
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12 posted 01-29-2000 11:25 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

I'm glad you left CrazyChick...don't go back...please.....people like this don't usually change....time will heal the hurt and then you will be glad that you did what you did. I'm talking from experience. Don't waste your life. It is too short.
I like your poem very much!

Denise
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