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Open Poetry #5

dreams

Smore
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since 2000-01-24

Posts 67
el paso

0 posted 2000-01-26 10:47 PM

There are dreams that sail away to sea
and those that stay at home

Dreams in need of company
and those which stand alone

Dreams that stay inside all night
and never see the light

But if dreams can come true
I swear tonight I'll be dreaming of you

[This message has been edited by Smore (edited 01-27-2000).]

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

1 posted 2000-01-26 11:25 PM

this poem made me smile...short and sweet and to the point... sweet dreams to us all

Janet Marie

..."She says baby,
It's 3am I must be lonely,
When she says baby,
Well I can't help but be scared of it all sometimes,
Says the rains gonna wash away I believe it."
Matchbox20

Smore
Member

since 2000-01-24

Posts 67
el paso

2 posted 2000-01-27 10:21 PM

sorry, the second line should be:
And dreams that stay at home.

Smore
Member

since 2000-01-24

Posts 67
el paso

3 posted 2000-01-27 10:23 PM

nevermind, i fixed it.

Love isn't a miracle in life, the miracle of life is love.

[This message has been edited by Smore (edited 01-27-2000).]

G. A. Webb
Member

since 2000-01-21

Posts 441
Stanton, California, USA

4 posted 2000-01-27 10:28 PM

Bravo, very sweet. Tell me, who will you be dreaming about?

Great job!

G

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