smore: the verse is a little awkward, but heck, we all do that... i like this quite a bit and i hope to see more of you on the forum soon i can sympathize with your loss and i hope that you will learn and grow from it and not let it eat at you...
jerome the boy with no life
A savage place! as holy and enchanted
As e'er beneath a waning moon was haunted
By woman wailing for her demon-lover!