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my loss

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Smore
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0 posted 01-26-2000 09:56 PM       View Profile for Smore   Email Smore   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Smore



      I was sure it'd be your loss
     I thought you'd be the one to cry
      But now I see its me thats lost
     Since someone new has caught your eye    

     I can see you have now moved on
    Yet my heart is still singing your song      
     Its words are written inside my head
    Like all the sweet words you'd ever said.

    I always had so much to give
     Yet never took anything from you
    You were my true reason to live
     But now I must find a reason thats new        
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Tara Simms
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Oh the pain of heartbreak. We've all been there.
poetry_kills
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since 12-04-1999
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smore: the verse is a little awkward, but heck, we all do that... i like this quite a bit and i hope to see more of you on the forum soon    i can sympathize with your loss and i hope that you will learn and grow from it and not let it eat at you...

sincerely,
jerome the boy with no life

 A savage place! as holy and enchanted
As e'er beneath a waning moon was haunted
By woman wailing for her demon-lover!
~Coleridge
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