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minime
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since 2000-01-26
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0 posted 2000-01-26 08:34 PM


The moon is bright
  o what a night
To sit and think
  of all thats right
To think of you
  and to think of me
To think of what
  we could be
To think of all
  that we could do
Together forever
  just me and you
To think of how
  we could grow
And with each other
  there is a lot to know
A lot to see
  a lot to do
A lot of stuff
  for me and you
It would keep us busy
  throughout the years
As we laugh and sing
  and shed our tears
And as I sit
  under the moon
I hope and pray
  you will come soon.

dedicated to Courtney!!

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1 posted 2000-01-26 08:36 PM


I hope Courtney knows what a romantic you are minime. This is so sweet! -SEA
poetry_kills
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2 posted 2000-01-26 10:27 PM


minime: very good job   i'm not usually a fan of short verses, but you do a good job here and pull it off quite nicely if i do say so myself...  

sincerely,
jerome the boy with no corndog

 A savage place! as holy and enchanted
As e'er beneath a waning moon was haunted
By woman wailing for her demon-lover!
~Coleridge

minime
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3 posted 2000-01-27 04:23 PM


she has commented on how she thinks that I am pretty romantic and how she wishes more guys would take it upon themselves to be romantic without the girl telling them to be
minime
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4 posted 2000-01-27 04:24 PM


and also forgot to say thank you very much for the nice comments
Beri
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5 posted 2000-01-27 09:00 PM


How romantically sweet!  Courtney was right minime!  I loved it.  And yes it would be nice for more guys to be romantic on their own.  I have come across a few who are, but then there are alot of the ones that need to be told of romance.  But after reading this, I think you do have that aspect all under control!  Well done.

 If you love something, set it free, if it comes back to you, its meant to be...


hoot_owl_rn
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since 1999-07-05
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Glen Hope, PA USA
6 posted 2000-01-28 12:19 PM


Think you got the romance part down pat  
Koon
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since 2000-01-27
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Singapore
7 posted 2000-01-28 08:49 AM


You make all males proud!!! Now they know that we can be romantic too....
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