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RainbowGirl
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0 posted 01-26-2000 05:41 PM       View Profile for RainbowGirl   Email RainbowGirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit RainbowGirl's Home Page   View IP for RainbowGirl

Have you ever felt alone with yourself
where you question all that you feel
how your dreams get lost within fiction
and your thoughts you're afraid to reveal?

If you did would anyone really understand
the mess that goes on in your head
outside you're full of laughter and sunshine
inside is vunerable so afraid you'll be read

I wish I knew how to handle all this
the mixture of sadness and dispair
the core of my heart seems so lost
in need of love and repair

I'm not used to feeling this way
as I fight with all that I know
once my heart knew the route to my mind
but now they've both gone astray

When I'm laying calm inside my dreams
my minds polishes off the dust
the world is organised or so it seems
past and future united in trust...

Sorry it doesn't make sense


 
No matter how your heart is grieving
if you keep on believing
the dream that you wish
will come true...




[This message has been edited by RainbowGirl (edited 01-26-2000).]
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Munda
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1 posted 01-26-2000 05:56 PM       View Profile for Munda   Email Munda   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Munda's Home Page   View IP for Munda

Oh, but it does make sense RG ! Praying with and for you, crying with and for you, laughing with and for you. ((((((HUGS))))))
devina
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2 posted 01-26-2000 06:23 PM       View Profile for devina   Email devina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for devina

Believe me- you're making sense!! Now smile for me??

 Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...
Toerag
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3 posted 01-26-2000 06:26 PM       View Profile for Toerag   Email Toerag   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Toerag

Yanno VL....if it makes sense to me....it would to anyone sweets....and I can relate to this like a blood brother!
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4 posted 01-26-2000 06:29 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth   Email Elizabeth   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Elizabeth's Home Page   View IP for Elizabeth

It makes plenty of sense, Rainbow. I have felt this way before myself.

Elizabeth

 "He have his goodness now. God forbid I take it from him!"
-The Crucible

RainbowGirl
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5 posted 01-26-2000 06:40 PM       View Profile for RainbowGirl   Email RainbowGirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit RainbowGirl's Home Page   View IP for RainbowGirl

Munda: I know, thank you sweetheart...just feeling blue, but like she said to the doctor..."I'm fine, how are you"..  

HUGS

Devina: I'm not normally like this, I normally see sweetness on the end of my shoe, but not always...ooops

HUGS

Darling: Well says your big sister..*g*..thank heavens we have brothers that understand their sister's..*g*

HUSG darling

Elizabeth: My ears are always open, I understand much of this world but not much about me...  

HUGS

 Feed your dreams with love...


[This message has been edited by RainbowGirl (edited 01-26-2000).]
HelmutB
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6 posted 01-26-2000 07:14 PM       View Profile for HelmutB   Email HelmutB   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit HelmutB's Home Page   View IP for HelmutB

It does make sense to me.
Here have a hug from me.
It's holding you and it is free
I'm sad that you're feeling sad
How about a smile  

 The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools.

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7 posted 01-26-2000 07:30 PM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

I have thread to sew up seams
But who knows how to mend our dreams?
Tape will seal a package tight
But what can make a heart feel right?
Patches, sealants, string and glue
None of these will repair you.
Still I offer all I can
It isn't much... a loving hand.
Pepper
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8 posted 01-26-2000 07:46 PM       View Profile for Pepper   Email Pepper   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Pepper

Sending Big HUGS Rainbow.....
Denise
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9 posted 01-26-2000 07:57 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

I know what you mean, it makes perfect sense to me. You remain in my thoughts and prayers and I'm here whenever you need to talk. HUGS

Denise
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10 posted 01-26-2000 08:02 PM       View Profile for RainbowGirl   Email RainbowGirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit RainbowGirl's Home Page   View IP for RainbowGirl

Helmut:

Hugs are something I always treasure
can never be given with inch or measure
but each one given is truly felt
with grateful heartfelt pleasure

HUGS

Suthern:

In your hand you hold the thread
that continues round the reel
like every thought within your head
it darns with love to heal

HUSG

Pepper:

As you cough and splutter
giving the odd occasional burp
I hear the words you utter
like spoon with soup I slurp

hmmmm, well....LOL

HUSG

Denise:

You caught me snook in there
with words of care and prayer
with you and all my friends
one day - my heart will mend

HUGS




 Feed your dreams with love...




[This message has been edited by RainbowGirl (edited 01-26-2000).]
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11 posted 01-26-2000 10:44 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

You can't see sweetness at the end of your shoe.....there's a Toe there!!!

Hang in, Cindy. Even though only one end of the rainbow has a pot of gold, the other is equally important. If you understand what I just said, please e-mail the explanation to me because I'm lost!!!!  
Toerag
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12 posted 01-27-2000 07:28 AM       View Profile for Toerag   Email Toerag   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Toerag

ROTF@Balladeer...you roach!
hoot_owl_rn
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13 posted 01-27-2000 10:35 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

You know I've been here RG, makes perfect sense to me
Martie
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14 posted 01-27-2000 10:46 AM       View Profile for Martie   Email Martie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Martie's Home Page   View IP for Martie

You make perfect sense to me
for I know this place you see,
and day, hour or week, don't fear
you will find it disappear

Sending you Hugs!
Nicole
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15 posted 01-27-2000 01:30 PM       View Profile for Nicole   Email Nicole   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Nicole

Although I really know you not
I've been around long enough to see
The HUSG and love and joy you've got  
And share with us most graciously!

It truly pains me to see you sad!
But your words make perfect sense, you see
I just hate to think you're feeling bad
So here's some HUSG and love and joy from me!  

And there's tons more hugs where those came from, hon!  You can have 'em all if you need 'em.  

 May I never be too busy to help another's load,
Then I'll be drinking from the saucer 'cause my cup has overflowed.

--Author Unknown
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16 posted 01-27-2000 01:56 PM       View Profile for Local Rebel   Email Local Rebel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Local Rebel

I don't do needles and thread... but I have huggsz!!!

HuggsZ Cindy!
LngJhnAg
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17 posted 01-27-2000 03:51 PM       View Profile for LngJhnAg   Email LngJhnAg   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for LngJhnAg

Rebel man don't do thread,
To him its second rate.
Afore he used it, he'd be dead,
Ho only loves his gray duct tape.

Queen

I'm truly sorry you feel so sad.  I think we should take up a collection and send old Toe over there to cheer you up.  I figure if they'll let Mike Tyson into your country, we might be able to smuggle Toerag into the Isles in a bale of mothballs or something.  Whatta ya think?
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18 posted 01-27-2000 06:34 PM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SEA

RainbowGirl, it made sence to me......Look back a couple pages and read Always -Inside. It's no where near as beautiful as your words,but, I get it. _SEA
lasexycat
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19 posted 01-27-2000 06:50 PM       View Profile for lasexycat   Email lasexycat   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit lasexycat's Home Page   View IP for lasexycat

Oh yeah, thats all i could say when your words i read. I know the feeling of the madness in your head.
I Really liked it, i will save this one. Thank You!

 Cathy
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20 posted 02-01-2000 07:28 AM       View Profile for Nan   Email Nan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nan's Home Page   View IP for Nan

...um - yep - it makes perfect sense to me.... ... I think
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