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RainbowGirl
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0 posted 2000-01-26 05:41 PM


Have you ever felt alone with yourself
where you question all that you feel
how your dreams get lost within fiction
and your thoughts you're afraid to reveal?

If you did would anyone really understand
the mess that goes on in your head
outside you're full of laughter and sunshine
inside is vunerable so afraid you'll be read

I wish I knew how to handle all this
the mixture of sadness and dispair
the core of my heart seems so lost
in need of love and repair

I'm not used to feeling this way
as I fight with all that I know
once my heart knew the route to my mind
but now they've both gone astray

When I'm laying calm inside my dreams
my minds polishes off the dust
the world is organised or so it seems
past and future united in trust...

Sorry it doesn't make sense
< !signature-->

 
No matter how your heart is grieving
if you keep on believing
the dream that you wish
will come true...




[This message has been edited by RainbowGirl (edited 01-26-2000).]

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Munda
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1 posted 2000-01-26 05:56 PM


Oh, but it does make sense RG ! Praying with and for you, crying with and for you, laughing with and for you. ((((((HUGS))))))

devina
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2 posted 2000-01-26 06:23 PM


Believe me- you're making sense!! Now smile for me??

 Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...

Toerag
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3 posted 2000-01-26 06:26 PM


Yanno VL....if it makes sense to me....it would to anyone sweets....and I can relate to this like a blood brother!
Elizabeth
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4 posted 2000-01-26 06:29 PM


It makes plenty of sense, Rainbow. I have felt this way before myself.

Elizabeth

 "He have his goodness now. God forbid I take it from him!"
-The Crucible


RainbowGirl
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5 posted 2000-01-26 06:40 PM


Munda: I know, thank you sweetheart...just feeling blue, but like she said to the doctor..."I'm fine, how are you"..  

HUGS

Devina: I'm not normally like this, I normally see sweetness on the end of my shoe, but not always...ooops

HUGS

Darling: Well says your big sister..*g*..thank heavens we have brothers that understand their sister's..*g*

HUSG darling

Elizabeth: My ears are always open, I understand much of this world but not much about me...  

HUGS< !signature-->

 Feed your dreams with love...


[This message has been edited by RainbowGirl (edited 01-26-2000).]

HelmutB
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6 posted 2000-01-26 07:14 PM


It does make sense to me.
Here have a hug from me.
It's holding you and it is free
I'm sad that you're feeling sad
How about a smile  

 The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools.


suthern
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7 posted 2000-01-26 07:30 PM


I have thread to sew up seams
But who knows how to mend our dreams?
Tape will seal a package tight
But what can make a heart feel right?
Patches, sealants, string and glue
None of these will repair you.
Still I offer all I can
It isn't much... a loving hand.

Pepper
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8 posted 2000-01-26 07:46 PM


Sending Big HUGS Rainbow.....
Denise
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9 posted 2000-01-26 07:57 PM


I know what you mean, it makes perfect sense to me. You remain in my thoughts and prayers and I'm here whenever you need to talk. HUGS

Denise

RainbowGirl
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10 posted 2000-01-26 08:02 PM


Helmut:

Hugs are something I always treasure
can never be given with inch or measure
but each one given is truly felt
with grateful heartfelt pleasure

HUGS

Suthern:

In your hand you hold the thread
that continues round the reel
like every thought within your head
it darns with love to heal

HUSG

Pepper:

As you cough and splutter
giving the odd occasional burp
I hear the words you utter
like spoon with soup I slurp

hmmmm, well....LOL

HUSG

Denise:

You caught me snook in there
with words of care and prayer
with you and all my friends
one day - my heart will mend

HUGS


< !signature-->

 Feed your dreams with love...




[This message has been edited by RainbowGirl (edited 01-26-2000).]

Balladeer
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11 posted 2000-01-26 10:44 PM


You can't see sweetness at the end of your shoe.....there's a Toe there!!!

Hang in, Cindy. Even though only one end of the rainbow has a pot of gold, the other is equally important. If you understand what I just said, please e-mail the explanation to me because I'm lost!!!!  

Toerag
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12 posted 2000-01-27 07:28 AM


ROTF@Balladeer...you roach!
hoot_owl_rn
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13 posted 2000-01-27 10:35 AM


You know I've been here RG, makes perfect sense to me
Martie
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14 posted 2000-01-27 10:46 AM


You make perfect sense to me
for I know this place you see,
and day, hour or week, don't fear
you will find it disappear

Sending you Hugs!

Nicole
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15 posted 2000-01-27 01:30 PM


Although I really know you not
I've been around long enough to see
The HUSG and love and joy you've got  
And share with us most graciously!

It truly pains me to see you sad!
But your words make perfect sense, you see
I just hate to think you're feeling bad
So here's some HUSG and love and joy from me!  

And there's tons more hugs where those came from, hon!  You can have 'em all if you need 'em.  

 May I never be too busy to help another's load,
Then I'll be drinking from the saucer 'cause my cup has overflowed.

--Author Unknown

Local Rebel
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16 posted 2000-01-27 01:56 PM


I don't do needles and thread... but I have huggsz!!!

HuggsZ Cindy!

LngJhnAg
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17 posted 2000-01-27 03:51 PM


Rebel man don't do thread,
To him its second rate.
Afore he used it, he'd be dead,
Ho only loves his gray duct tape.

Queen

I'm truly sorry you feel so sad.  I think we should take up a collection and send old Toe over there to cheer you up.  I figure if they'll let Mike Tyson into your country, we might be able to smuggle Toerag into the Isles in a bale of mothballs or something.  Whatta ya think?

SEA
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18 posted 2000-01-27 06:34 PM


RainbowGirl, it made sence to me......Look back a couple pages and read Always -Inside. It's no where near as beautiful as your words,but, I get it. _SEA
lasexycat
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19 posted 2000-01-27 06:50 PM


Oh yeah, thats all i could say when your words i read. I know the feeling of the madness in your head.
I Really liked it, i will save this one. Thank You!

 Cathy

Nan
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20 posted 2000-02-01 07:28 AM


...um - yep - it makes perfect sense to me.... ... I think
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