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Sunshine
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0 posted 2000-01-26 02:24 PM


Songs Without Words

Songs without words,
a lovely collection of music,
dreamy, warm, comforting, serene,
and you hum, and hum, and hum the themes.

Melodies softly enfolding
warming the soul with sound
close to your ear, silent words, shhhh
no words, but echoes all around.

Songs without words,
dreamy, warm, serene
hum, and hum, and hum the themes,
melodies bring on the dreams.

And in the music’s pause,
created only to give you cause
to wait on someone other than you,
songs without words, give life new view.

Ivory tinkling, violin's sweet mystic light
new life in heaven, joyous delight,
songs without words, a haven for my soul
warms me naturally, brings me in from the cold.

Songs without words,
a lovely collection of music,
dreamy, warm, comforting, serene,
and you hum, and hum, and hum the themes.

26 January, 2000
©KRJ




 Sunshine
Look, then, into thine heart, and write ~~~ Henry Wadsworth Longfellow



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1 posted 2000-01-26 02:26 PM


Beautiful! What more can I say, this is great! -SEA
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2 posted 2000-01-26 02:27 PM


You have written a song with your words.  Lovely!
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3 posted 2000-01-26 03:06 PM


Makes me want to go turn on some music!  Nicely done!
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4 posted 2000-01-26 03:11 PM


First, I should have said this is best read in a whisper, slowly...

Sea, welcome to Passions and thank you for your lovely comment

Martie, lovely suits you, too,

Anne, you may come and listen with me.  Welcome to Passions!

 Sunshine
Look, then, into thine heart, and write ~~~ Henry Wadsworth Longfellow



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5 posted 2000-01-26 03:31 PM


Very lovely Sunshine....
Dreamy quality...

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6 posted 2000-01-26 07:35 PM


Thank you Pepper, very much!

 Sunshine
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7 posted 2000-01-26 11:49 PM


This is music to my ears!! Very lovely song, Sunshine!  

Denise

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So very glad you enjoyed, denise, come back soon...

 Sunshine
Look, then, into thine heart, and write ~~~ Henry Wadsworth Longfellow



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9 posted 2000-01-27 09:51 AM


Sunshine,
Nice paint, good words, wonderful poem. *L* Sy

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10 posted 2000-01-27 10:15 AM


Sy, brush in hand looking for more words to paint again.  Thank you for the lovely comment.

 Sunshine
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11 posted 2000-07-07 08:36 PM


I liked it very much!!!!!!!
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Jim Brickman is an excellent artist!
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13 posted 2008-01-05 08:20 PM


How beautiful a poem. Yap. When happily hum a tune, we care not who is listening or who is not.

a very lovely poem..make me happy!!

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