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Wings of Grace |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
As evening paints a sunset, across sky's western face, I soar above on winds of time, on wings of feathered grace, In the distance, mountains high, in regal majesty, Stand watch o'er plains that stretch below, as far as eyes can see. Sentinels, stone granite peaks, capped in virgin snow, From their bosoms to the plains, the snow as rivers flow, 'Twixt the peaks and verdant plains, lay the mountain's valley, Conduit for the alpine streams, from forth the torrents sally. As hush of evening spreads its dark, the sky irrupts ablaze, A million twinkling stars above, hearken heaven's praise, Reflected on the plains below, the twinkling of star's lights, Unfettered wings of angel's grace, I soar into the night. |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
You paint an amazing picture with your beautiful words! -SEA |
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Ted Reynolds Member
since 1999-12-15
Posts 331 |
Really beautiful. Sure makes me wonder where my wings are -- why am I sitting here at an office desk. Sigh . . . You certainly paint a vividly real picture here, Mike. I felt I was soaring with you. |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
This is so beautiful Mike, you got my wanderlust going with this scene. I could see it so clear, I want to really be there. Thanks for the wonderful picture. |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
Thank you Ted, Sea and Martie, glad you enjoyed. |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Mike, lovely imagery. Enjoyed it!  Let your heart guide you. It whispers, so listen closely. ~Isis~ (Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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Denise
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since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is beautiful, Mike! You painted an amazing picture in my mind with this one! Denise |
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Skyfyre Senior Member
since 1999-08-15
Posts 1906Sitting in Michael's Lap |
Mike! Tres Magnifique! Your writing just keeps getting better ... I did have one little suggestion, though ... I take it you meant to say "erupts," in line 9?  Triumphant, captivating verse! Keep it coming ... --Kess Full fathom five thy father lies, Of his bones are coral made, Those are pearls that were his eyes; Nothing of him that doth fade But doth suffer a sea-change Into something rich and strange... --William Shakespeare, from The Tempest |
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minime New Member
since 2000-01-26
Posts 8 |
you have an awesome way with words. |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
This piece is striking in its imagery, rhythm, and fluid language, Mike. Such a crisp and vivid creation! Claire |
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Alwye
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Beauty, pure, exquisite beauty. A lovely picture you paint here. I am impressed by your work, Mike. *Krista Knutson* ~*Like a lion, without fear of the howling pack, Like a gust of wind, ne'er trapped in a snare, Like a lotus blossom, ne'er sprinkled by water, Let me, like a unicorn, in solitude roam.*~ Hymn Of Buddha |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
Thank you all for the very gracious comments... have a nice day all as I sit here in the midst of a snowstorm... |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Striking |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Striking |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
You have captured a magical moment This is exquisite Liz |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Absolutely beautiful!! |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
I like it - I like it...   |
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