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Shadow's Dancing (Like I said, I love a challenge!)

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Sven
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In the moonlight, Shadow's dancing with Starlight
Their steps aren't practiced,
          They're improvised
And the results are there in the skies
Shining like diamonds right before our eyes.

In the moonlight, Shadow's dancing with Starlight
They move across the void
          With such effortless grace
Their twists and turns bring a smile to my face
And they're so easy to see from this high place.

In the moonlight, Shadow's dancing with Starlight
Take my hand my love
          And let me lead
Because you're the only partner I'll ever want and need
And since I've met you, my life has been blessed indeed.

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 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl

© Copyright 2000 John Garcia - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 01-26-2000 12:11 PM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

*sighs, very loudly* ah, how beautifully romantic. This is the type of poem I was expecting when I issued the challange. All have been wonderful, such an assortment, some romantic, some dark, some whistful. But it is the romantic poems that touch this born romantics heart. Thank you for the lovely post. Challange well met  
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2 posted 01-26-2000 12:18 PM       View Profile for Meadowmuse   Email Meadowmuse   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Meadowmuse's Home Page   View IP for Meadowmuse

Sven, yes, you certainly did say. And you certainly took to Hoot's challenge in gracefully poetic fashion. Another fine piece of writing!

Claire
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3 posted 01-28-2000 01:01 PM       View Profile for Sven   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sven

Thank you Hoot. . . Romance is my middle name. . . I was born this way. . .

And Meadowmuse. . . thank you also. . . I love romance and it's almost a way of life for me. . . which is why I love it here so much. . .

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 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl

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4 posted 01-28-2000 07:13 PM       View Profile for Corinne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Corinne

Now that's what I call romantic poetry!


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Thank you Corinne. . .there's much more where that came from. . .

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 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl

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Well done and very romantic. I used a line in one of the last ones I wrote. A couple of people commented on it. If you are willing, use "In the twilight, love's last blooming" in a poem. what do you say?  
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7 posted 02-01-2000 04:42 PM       View Profile for Sven   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sven

You've got it Marilyn!

Already on it's way!

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 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl

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8 posted 02-01-2000 06:33 PM       View Profile for Christopher   Email Christopher   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Christopher

Sven- Nailed it on this one!!!
Bravo and love the format!!!
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Very pretty, Sven!  

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