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Love For You

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cordell pennix
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0 posted 01-26-2000 08:46 AM       View Profile for cordell pennix   Email cordell pennix   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for cordell pennix

               Love For You


I was struck before the hour
Of a love so sudden and sweet.
Your face shone like a shining star
And made my own heart beat.
My face turned as pale as ever,
My legs refused to walk away.
Yet when you looked at me
What could I possibly say?
My life had suddenly seemed
To all just melt away.

Then my blood rush to my face
And took my sight away.
It seemed like it was midnight
When it was only mid-day
I could not see a single thing,
Words from my eyes did start,
They spoke as a chord does from a string
And a sweeter melody did play.

You seemed to hear my silent voice
And love's appeal to dream
I never saw such a sweet face
As the one that stood before me.
      

To:Lindsey this is how i was the first time i saw you
                                   Cordell

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This is incredibly sweet! Lindsey- are you reading this?! Wow   -SEA
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Cordell, I agree with SEA...such a sweetened tribute to your Love's vision. Nicely done!

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Cordell, Beautiful poem  
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Yes i have been reading them!!!  
 
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