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cordell pennix
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0 posted 2000-01-26 08:46 AM


               Love For You


I was struck before the hour
Of a love so sudden and sweet.
Your face shone like a shining star
And made my own heart beat.
My face turned as pale as ever,
My legs refused to walk away.
Yet when you looked at me
What could I possibly say?
My life had suddenly seemed
To all just melt away.

Then my blood rush to my face
And took my sight away.
It seemed like it was midnight
When it was only mid-day
I could not see a single thing,
Words from my eyes did start,
They spoke as a chord does from a string
And a sweeter melody did play.

You seemed to hear my silent voice
And love's appeal to dream
I never saw such a sweet face
As the one that stood before me.
      

To:Lindsey this is how i was the first time i saw you
                                   Cordell


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SEA
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1 posted 2000-01-26 12:14 PM


This is incredibly sweet! Lindsey- are you reading this?! Wow   -SEA
Meadowmuse
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2 posted 2000-01-26 12:20 PM


Cordell, I agree with SEA...such a sweetened tribute to your Love's vision. Nicely done!

Claire

Dolphins3
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3 posted 2000-01-26 02:18 PM


Cordell, Beautiful poem  
lindsey w
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4 posted 2000-01-26 05:19 PM


Yes i have been reading them!!!  
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