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Kevin Taylor
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0 posted 01-26-2000 03:03 AM       View Profile for Kevin Taylor   Email Kevin Taylor   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Kevin Taylor's Home Page   View IP for Kevin Taylor

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fold me, hold me
like a dove
kiss me, miss me
when I'm near
touch me, touch me
while I live
Don't wait until I die, my love

gently, softly
like a prayer
tuck me, send me
hold my hand
call me, hear me
from above
Defend me when I fall, my love




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kaleidoscope
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1 posted 01-26-2000 03:48 AM       View Profile for kaleidoscope   Email kaleidoscope   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for kaleidoscope

This is great!  Tender, brief, meaningful.
Severn
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2 posted 01-26-2000 04:31 AM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

I really like this...its sparity serves it well.



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Martie
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3 posted 01-26-2000 07:30 PM       View Profile for Martie   Email Martie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Martie's Home Page   View IP for Martie

I am familiar with this feeling and you have expressed it for me.  
Meadowmuse
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Kevin, I love the message of this poem...and reading it, very slowly, the second time through, I was thinking how lovely and moving it would be, sung something like kdlang's "Save Me." Really do love this.

Claire
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Very lovely, Kevin!  
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