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Despair Renewed

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tracie66
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Despair Renewed

I was captured, cornered like an animal
I was in despair
Everything was nothing, I did not care
Life was dull, I had no love
Just a calling from above
Into a dark world I had fallen
I could hear their constant calling
Everyone was my enemy
Even my own self
I had nothing
No clothes
No belongings
No wealth
But then one day I did awake
One true love it did take
I was woken by a loving face
Whose arms held out I did embrace
From that day forward, there was no other world
My world now is bright and unspoiled
© Copyright 2000 Tracie Maree Collis - All Rights Reserved
Severn
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1 posted 01-26-2000 04:27 AM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

Very nice, tracie!



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2 posted 01-26-2000 11:16 AM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SEA

Tracie, This is sooo good. As my husband would say, it's deep.   I enjoyed reading your poem very much. -SEA
Nicole
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Ah, the tonic of true love.     Well done, I enjoyed this poem very much.

 May I never be too busy to help another's load,
Then I'll be drinking from the saucer 'cause my cup has overflowed.

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tracie66
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4 posted 01-26-2000 05:11 PM       View Profile for tracie66   Email tracie66   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit tracie66's Home Page   View IP for tracie66

Dear Severn, sea & satiate
Thankyou for your kind replys and I look forward to reading some of your pieces.
tracie  
 
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