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Dancing In The Shadows (hoot's challenge)

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Eloise
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0 posted 01-26-2000 12:52 AM       View Profile for Eloise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Eloise

Darkness has fallen, but the night is still so bright.
Dancing in the shadows of the moonlight tonight.
Music playing softly, as we take another sip of wine.
I see the twinkle in your eyes, as I catch them watching mine.

The mood of the night is so peaceful and serene.
This mystical moment is almost like a dream.
The sensation of this evening stirs a passion deep within.
As I hear your soothing whisper carried on the gentle wind.

And as this midnight escapade continues to unfold.
We find within each other, a treasure to behold.
As our shadows from the moonlight dance upon the wall.
Together we will savor the enchantment of it all.

© Copyright 2000 Eloise - All Rights Reserved
Severn
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1 posted 01-26-2000 04:17 AM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

Eloise my friend - this is beautiful! So softly flowing...

And as this midnight escapade continues to unfold.
We find within each other, a treasure to behold.

Simply lovely lines - a wonderful image.

K


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life enriches writing'
Sylvia Plath
Elizabeth Santos
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2 posted 01-26-2000 06:46 AM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

You capture a romantic moment in this lovely poem. Very beautiful
Liz
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3 posted 01-26-2000 07:14 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Lovely, lovely lines, Eloise.

Softly playing through my mind,
like melodies of another time.
~*Marge*~


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hoot_owl_rn
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4 posted 01-26-2000 08:29 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Very beautiful. The assortment I'm getting with this challange is almost overwhelming
Eloise
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5 posted 01-26-2000 03:03 PM       View Profile for Eloise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Eloise

Kamla, Liz, Marge and Ruth, thank you all so much for your kind words.  Ruth this was a great challenge, and a wonderful assortment of responses at that.
Danny Holloway
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6 posted 01-26-2000 03:45 PM       View Profile for Danny Holloway   Email Danny Holloway   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Danny Holloway

A worthy response to the challenge.
Well done!
DH
Denise
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7 posted 01-26-2000 08:20 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Simply beautiful, Eloise! And romantic! Well done!

Denise
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8 posted 01-26-2000 08:34 PM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SEA

I'll have to echo Denise-Beautiful and Romantic! Enjoyed the read. -SEA
Skyfyre
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9 posted 01-26-2000 08:55 PM       View Profile for Skyfyre   Email Skyfyre   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Skyfyre

Ah, this sets one to longing, now doesn't it..?  Well done, Eloise ...

--Kess



 Full fathom five thy father lies,
Of his bones are coral made,
Those are pearls that were his eyes;
Nothing of him that doth fade
But doth suffer a sea-change
Into something rich and strange...


--William Shakespeare, from The Tempest

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