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One Who Understands
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0 posted 01-26-2000 12:35 AM       View Profile for One Who Understands   Email One Who Understands   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for One Who Understands

Ha, talk about reverse phsycology.  Well now that you are here, might as well read my wonderful poem

This poem is written from my personal experience with my friends...

Iíd never do that to him.

I feel so alone, I feel like Iím going to burst.
I feel like Iím always left out, I feel like Iím always the worst.
Why must I fail every time, why must I be in the cold.
Why must I be the only one, who has no hand to hold.

I knew it was going to happen, sooner or later it would be.
All my friends would have a girl, every last oneÖbut me.
The friend I depended on, is no longer there.
He no longer calls me, he no longer cares.

We always went out, every lonely weekend night.
We always suck together, and talked when things werenít right.
But now he has her, and doesnít need me.
He just shut the door, closed his eyes and canít see.

He canít see my pain, he canít see my tears.
All the time we spent together, over the years.
Means nothing to him now, now that heís with her.
I wish he could only understand, the pain I endure.

But I am happy for him, because he is no longer sad.
Just like I am now, even though Iím still glad.
I just canít understand why, he ignores me like he does.
I guess he likes her more, or maybe itís just because.

Maybe Iím just jealous, maybe itís a sin.
All I really know is, Iíd never do that to him.

I am in a new relationship and I wanted to tell my friend Mike that I will still be there for him.  And that my girlfriend will never take his place.





[This message has been edited by One Who Understands (edited 01-27-2000).]
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WolfsMate
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1 posted 01-26-2000 03:03 AM       View Profile for WolfsMate   Email WolfsMate   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for WolfsMate

it's difficult to be alone when your friends are not. Well done.

 
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2 posted 01-26-2000 12:00 PM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SEA

One Who Understands, It was as if you plucked those words from the feelings in my heart. My best friend is a man( not counting my husband of course) and now that he is married I stoped existing. It hurts. Your poem touched my heart. It is wonderful. I hope Mike knows what an amazing friend he has in you. -SEA
One Who Understands
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3 posted 01-26-2000 03:52 PM       View Profile for One Who Understands   Email One Who Understands   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for One Who Understands

Thank you SEA,

I went through this with both of my best friends, and I am going to be so careful that I don't do the same thing that happend to me, to my other friend Mike.

 
One Who Understands
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4 posted 01-27-2000 01:00 AM       View Profile for One Who Understands   Email One Who Understands   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for One Who Understands

Sorry I had to trick you into reading my fabulous poem

 
tracie66
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5 posted 01-28-2000 05:41 PM       View Profile for tracie66   Email tracie66   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit tracie66's Home Page   View IP for tracie66

Glad your no longer alone and that it all worked out. I hope your writing some romantic poems for your girl, she'll love them. Thanks for tricking me I loved reading this, a little sad but good just the same.
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