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tulip
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0 posted 2000-01-26 12:32 PM


To hear you all say
who you love on this day,
they're your world and your all,
and they stop where you fall.
Your wishes and dreams
are all that they seem.
The person you love
returns your feelings...

Well, for me I can only
wish on a star,
I cry as I search
through near and afar.
I hope I can find
the things in my mind.
To have someone say,
I want you to stay...

Well, I want what you have...!


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One Who Understands
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1 posted 2000-01-26 12:37 PM


You just reached down my throught, and ripped out my very words and feelings
minime
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2 posted 2000-01-26 08:07 PM


awesome!!  that is almost the exact way I feel
Lorelei54
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3 posted 2000-01-26 08:17 PM


Dear Tulip,
Life is not always what it seems...
True love will find you when you least expect it...

SEA
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4 posted 2000-01-26 10:48 PM


Tulip, just around the corner, just out of sight is the one of your dreams. You can't see around the corner, you aren't supposed to. It's a wonderful suprise! It's coming, I promise!   -SEA
Denise
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5 posted 2000-01-26 11:28 PM


Lovely poem, Tulip! I enjoyed this! I hope all your dreams come true!

Denise

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Cali
6 posted 2000-01-27 01:30 AM


well, my fingers are crossed for you dear...and myself as well! Maybe with Valentines Day coming that ONE will appear!!

 Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...

tulip
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7 posted 2000-01-29 03:29 AM


You know, just to hear the incredible feelings other people have about that special someone...All the people that are loved by you guys are very lucky!!!
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