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SEA
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0 posted 2000-01-25 11:46 PM



God,
are you listening,
tell me,
are you there?

I'm not feeling
very good tonight
I'm not sure what's wrong
but something sure isn't right

God,
are you there?
I see the doctor Friday,
and I'm really scared.
God,
are you listening,
please hear my prayer.

I'm afraid
I don't want to be,
What is wrong?!
What's going on with me?!

God,
are you there?
tell me I'll be alright
God,
I hope you're listening,
I'm not feeling
very good tonight.

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One Who Understands
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1 posted 2000-01-25 11:52 PM


Yes God is there.  If you close your eyes and listen to your heart beat, you will feel him, and he will speak to you.

God Bless

G. A. Webb
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2 posted 2000-01-26 12:02 PM


Well he better be there for you Sea
Or else he'll have to deal with me

I hope everything is ok. If you need a friend, I'm here.

G

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One Who Understands...... Thank you, I know He is there, just really hope He's at Kaiser on Friday!- SEA

G.A. Webb.......Thank you so very much. Friends are always welcome. -SEA

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4 posted 2000-01-26 12:21 PM


Please consider me one, sea. I wish you the best.
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5 posted 2000-01-26 12:32 PM


SEA, yes God hears and is with you. And will be with you...just talk to him, trust in him, allow yourself to fear but try to keep faith, know that you are human, and to fear what is uncertain is natural. Keeping you close in quiet thoughts...((((you))))
Claire

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6 posted 2000-01-26 02:19 AM


Sea
God is with you and will be with you...
Traciexxxx

SEA
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7 posted 2000-01-26 11:23 AM


Balladeer, thank you, I will.

Claire, thank you, I feel so scared not knowing what is going on with my body. I talk to God every day.  

Tracie, thanks.  

-SEA-

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8 posted 2000-01-26 02:15 PM


Not knowing is a fearful thing, and waiting for knowledge is so difficult.  I wish you peace during this hard time.
Danny Holloway
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9 posted 2000-01-26 03:24 PM


He is with you, constantly there,
not to worry, He hears your prayer.
Wishing you the best.
DH

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10 posted 2000-01-26 03:30 PM


With folks such as yourself...God's always there.....Folks worth listening to, he hears....God knows I'm no authority.....but he listens to folks like you!
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11 posted 2000-01-26 04:22 PM


SEA sending you big (f)raidy (c)at hugs....sounds like you could use one about now  
Elizabeth Santos
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12 posted 2000-01-26 04:32 PM


SEA, I pray everything is all right with you. I know God is by your side. Best wishes and a big HUG
Liz

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Everyone: thank you for you kind words of support. My husband is taking Friday off and going with me to hold my hand, as I am a Huge fraidy cat! We are hoping it's no big deal. But being dizzy and having headaches with no other symptoms is so fustrating. - SEA
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14 posted 2000-01-26 05:39 PM


Sea, God is watching, and his angels are hovering.  You are in our prayers.  Keep us posted.  And thank your husband for all of us that he is attending with you.

 Sunshine
Look, then, into thine heart, and write ~~~ Henry Wadsworth Longfellow



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15 posted 2000-01-26 06:01 PM


Dizzy?...And I didn't even know you were blonde?.....Honey, just get your "schtuff" together.....You're gonna be fine....and even if they do find something...think about it?...You're a tuff old broad...right?...You're an optimist cuz I can read it in your work?...Look how nice ya been to me....a damned old Toerag?..geeesch! settle down, take things one at a time, and think positive....ya got all these poets and friends.....and just how many people can say they have a Toerag that loves them?.....Not a whole hell of alot let me tell ya...And being a pal of Toerag is good....I made a deal with God....I promised him I wouldn't kill anyone again, I wouldn't drink more than usual, (which is humanly impossible anyway), and that I'd give my heart to him cuz I know the devil already has my ass....so don't worry....hang in there...and know Toe's thinking of ya....okay?...
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16 posted 2000-01-26 08:15 PM


SEA-
You KNOW that my prayers are with you.

Wouldn't surprise me if the doctors at
Kaiser look in and find little muses running around.  They'll undoubtedly prescribe
a double dose of Passion's In Poetry
to be taken daily.

God will be there to hold your other hand.
Angels are dispatched on every prayer and
honey, you've got them coming from every corner of the world.

Love you ~Marge~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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17 posted 2000-01-26 08:25 PM


Oh Toe and Marge...... you made me cry....like a big baby!I can't tell you how nice it is to know you care. I'm so glad I came here. I may never see your faces or you mine, but I've seen your hearts and they are beautiful. Toe, I have Auburn\brown hair. Geez my brother said the same thing about the blonde bit....Thans again. -SEA oh yea, I'll tell you how it goes......
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18 posted 2000-01-26 08:30 PM


You'll be in my thoughts and prayers as well, SEA. God bless you!

Denise

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19 posted 2000-01-26 08:38 PM


Denise, thank you. My fear is easing knowing I have so many friends wishing me well. -SEA
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20 posted 2000-01-26 09:29 PM


Sea - I've been there - the 'not knowing' part, and believe me you will feel so much better after you go to the doctors...God I am sure is indeed with you. BIG hugs and BIG wishes for all the best...

K

 'Writing sharpens life;
life enriches writing'
Sylvia Plath

Deb Lynne
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21 posted 2000-01-26 10:08 PM


Dear God, are you listening?
Teardrops fall like rain drops glistening
One of your children needs a prayer
Just to know that you'll be there
Give her courage not to worry
Not to do things in a hurry
Lay it all upon your shoulder
Let her know you are her boulder
Hear our prayers for our dear SEA
We gladly bring all things to thee
Be with her family, let them know
You are with them wherever they go

Amen


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22 posted 2000-01-26 10:30 PM


He sure is there! He hears every prayer and every fear. He is everywhere with you all the time! I pray you will be ok!
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23 posted 2000-01-26 10:43 PM


Severn, Deb, and Whtdove, Thank you. Each time I get a new message of support and encouragement I feel so good inside.....Deb, your poem response was great, thank you. I'm trippin reading things trying to figure out what's wrong. Guess I'll just have to wait till Friday.....it seems so far away. Ugh. Again, thank you from my heart.   -SEA
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