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Primal Notes

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broker6
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Primal Notes
By ©Richard Budig 2000

Breeze driven leaves
stick to the fence
like post-em notes
on the fridge
beside the window
where I watch her
sift bulbs from earth,
her seed crop
for next summer's
yellow and purple.
After an hour or so
she comes in for tea
and I catch from her
the scent of ozone
and primal earth
that awakens in me
an equally primal urge.


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Wow,
very powerful essence!
Laurel
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I enjoyed this one very much!  
Denise
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WOW! This is excellent, Richard! How did I ever miss this one?!  Great job!!
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...and so life continues.  Well done!

 Sunshine
Look, then, into thine heart, and write ~~~ Henry Wadsworth Longfellow


 
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