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Travis
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0 posted 2000-01-25 11:29 PM



God is smiling upon me,
It only stands to reason.
Look at my wonderful life,
And all the great he has done.

My family, My life’s breath.
They give me strength and love.
Who else could give me such a gift,
Except our God above.

My friends, and their support,
Who would never miss my call.
Always present, always near.
They pick me up, when I fall.

My life, from then till now,
and everything I have done.
Has been blessed in every way,
He is the Magnificent One.

The Alpha and Omega,
Creator of the Heavens.
Jehovah Jirah, Jehovah Ratha.
Our Sacrificial Lamb.

If I could give my life,
Reflecting upon all you do.
Truly without a doubt,
I would give it back to you.


I Love You,
Travis

© Copyright 2000 Travis - All Rights Reserved
SEA
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1 posted 2000-01-25 11:38 PM


THIS WAS POSTED WRONG,  I AM NOT TRAVIS. WHAT THE HECK WAS THAT?!- SEA
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2 posted 2000-01-25 11:40 PM


I posed a poem, it came up as yours- sorry, I'll try to figure out what happened. Sorry -SEA
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3 posted 2000-01-25 11:50 PM


Hopefully SEA can get her things together ( )
But other than that, I think it is wonderful that you appreciate what God has done for your life.  It is a great thing when you are able to recognize how lucky you really are

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4 posted 2000-01-25 11:59 PM


Travis, your poem is beautiful. I guess I posted mine at the same time, or my computer is jacked up. In any case I do apologize for my confusion. Please forgive me.- SEA
Denise
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5 posted 2000-02-04 02:19 PM


Fantastic poem, Travis! He is wonderful, isn't He?!

Denise

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6 posted 2000-02-04 02:44 PM


Well.....Travis or Sea....who ever this belongs to, it's beautiful  
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7 posted 2000-02-04 02:56 PM


What a positive way to look at this life, makes one pause to remember and give our own thanks.....Thank you for sharing it, it's beautiful.
Travis
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8 posted 2000-02-04 06:07 PM


Thank you for reading this poem......I always enjoy comments, suggestions, and even constructive criticism.....

Again, I'm glad you all enjoyed this one.  He is a wonderful God.  Till next time, happy reading and writing.  =)

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