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My Amazing Jamie Dawn (a poem for my love)

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rychard
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0 posted 01-25-2000 11:03 PM       View Profile for rychard   Email rychard   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for rychard

MY AMAZING JAMIE DAWN

Named for the dawn, the first time I met you the sun came out
Banishing the darkness from my soul, lighting the way forward
Bringing hope and happiness, where before only desolation
Setting my heart aflame, melting my resolve to exist alone

Your beauty breathtaking, your hair spun gold, framing the face of an angel
Your eyes a bottomless blue, piercing the very heart of me
Your smile a sparkling diamond white, showing complete acceptance
Framed by lips of ruby red, so passionate, so soft and yielding

Your voice a salve for my soul, in it I hear nothing but love
The body of a goddess, lush and ripe, the taste of honey
Arms that hold me tight, quieten my fears, a safe refuge
Your back strong and straight, shouldering my troubles

Your love for me, so strong and true, unconditional, without expectations
Showing me to be someone I am proud of, someone worthy of love
Your love erasing the past hurt, bringing me back to the land of the living
Encouraging me to love again, to trust again, making me feel like a man

My love grows every day, consuming my every moment, my every thought
Will still love you as the last star winks out and the whole world is dark and cold
Then my love for you will truly shine, a beacon in the darkness, brilliant and pure
Lighting our way forward, you by my side as you belong. Together forever


© Copyright 2000 Richard Anthony Arancelovic - All Rights Reserved
Marge Tindal
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1 posted 01-26-2000 07:18 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Rychard-
Welcome to Passion's.
This is a beautiful statement of love.
The love is evident in each and every line.
Thank you for sharing it with us.
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Nan
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2 posted 01-26-2000 07:33 AM       View Profile for Nan   Email Nan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nan's Home Page   View IP for Nan

This is a wonderful tribute to Jamie Dawn... We welcome you to Passions and look forward to reading more of your work...
Check your email for something special

[This message has been edited by Nan (edited 01-26-2000).]
hoot_owl_rn
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3 posted 01-26-2000 09:30 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

What a passionate statement of love. I do hope you gave this to her. Welcome to passions  
Ted Reynolds
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4 posted 01-26-2000 10:16 AM       View Profile for Ted Reynolds   Email Ted Reynolds   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Ted Reynolds

May it continue true for both of you, every word.  Welcome to Passions, and thanks for sharing.
HelmutB
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5 posted 01-26-2000 02:56 PM       View Profile for HelmutB   Email HelmutB   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit HelmutB's Home Page   View IP for HelmutB

Welcome, and may your wish become true for you. A nice piece for your entry. Thank you

 The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools.

Anne
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6 posted 01-26-2000 03:04 PM       View Profile for Anne   Email Anne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Anne

Beautifully expressed!
Jamie Dawn
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7 posted 01-26-2000 07:09 PM       View Profile for Jamie Dawn   Edit/Delete Message     View IP for Jamie Dawn

Darling angel...You know that while I read this that my eyes are shining with tears of joy and laughter. Sweetheart, I long for the power that you have with words. I long to whisper to your heart as you whisper to mine. Not only in your words but in everything that you do and say each day. Forever and a day my darling. I love you Richard Anthony...I do.
Skyfyre
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8 posted 01-26-2000 11:25 PM       View Profile for Skyfyre   Email Skyfyre   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Skyfyre

**Deep, echoing sigh**

Ah, to be loved thusly, and by a poet besides!  What an entrance -- and what a lovely couple, to have spawned a piece such as this!  

Welcome, both of you!

--Kess


 Full fathom five thy father lies,
Of his bones are coral made,
Those are pearls that were his eyes;
Nothing of him that doth fade
But doth suffer a sea-change
Into something rich and strange...


--William Shakespeare, from The Tempest

Ted Reynolds
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9 posted 01-27-2000 07:50 AM       View Profile for Ted Reynolds   Email Ted Reynolds   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Ted Reynolds

Hey, Rychard, Jamie, we're all in love with you as a pair.  If things get ever get tight (and they will, you're human) there's a whole gang of people here to remind you of this debut, and help you keep on this loving track forever.  Blessings be to you both.  
Rosemary J. Gwaltney
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10 posted 01-27-2000 08:00 AM       View Profile for Rosemary J. Gwaltney   Email Rosemary J. Gwaltney   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Rosemary J. Gwaltney's Home Page   View IP for Rosemary J. Gwaltney

Indeed, what an absolutely exquisite love poem!  And yes, it is marvelous to be a poet married to a poet!  I am too, and my heart joins yours in your joy!  Welcome to Passions!
kaleidoscope
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11 posted 01-27-2000 08:02 AM       View Profile for kaleidoscope   Email kaleidoscope   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for kaleidoscope

Beautiful poem!  Nice to see such love.
 
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