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Fudge Brownie

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simplyYRREHS
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0 posted 01-25-2000 10:37 PM       View Profile for simplyYRREHS   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for simplyYRREHS

Sitting in the midst of glow
Provided by the fireplace show
I knew almost instinctively,
"me for you and you for me".

I said not a single word
But my heart, I knew you heard.
Sweetly you said, on bended knee,
"I have something for you, Sherry."

You knew my love for Chocolate's devine
So I thought this gesture not out of line
When you looked at me with eyes so heavy
And offered me a Little Debbie.

Taking it from you, suspecting not a thing
I nearly swallowed my own engagement ring!
That was the best fudge brownie of my life,
For that's when you asked me to be your wife.

~~~

Okay, maybe not the BEST fudge brownie, and certainly not the LAST, as that union is no longer.  But memories are what we have to grow on, and in my life 'rewinded', that was a very special time.  Hope you enjoyed!


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Candy
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1 posted 01-25-2000 10:41 PM       View Profile for Candy   Email Candy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Candy

Your poem was cute and sweet. i liked it.

            Candy
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2 posted 01-26-2000 12:24 AM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

Very cute, Sherry. All this time I thought you were just a twinkie.....
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3 posted 01-26-2000 12:28 AM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Sweet! I loved this....  
Meadowmuse
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4 posted 01-26-2000 12:29 AM       View Profile for Meadowmuse   Email Meadowmuse   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Meadowmuse's Home Page   View IP for Meadowmuse

What a sweet way to propose, and neat way to share the event. Very cute  

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5 posted 01-26-2000 08:02 AM       View Profile for simplyYRREHS   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for simplyYRREHS

Far from twinkie, Deer.  At the time, it was very sweet, but unfortunately, the "brownie" became sugar-free.  I'm hypoglycemic, so searching for sugar again.    

 "The finest qualities of our nature, like the bloom on fruits, can be preserved only by the most delicate handling. Yet, we do not treat ourselves nor another thus tenderly." ~Henry David Thoreau

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6 posted 01-26-2000 02:01 PM       View Profile for SnglDad   Email SnglDad   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SnglDad

Well that`s a new one.
I see a typo there.
You meant "Sugar Daddy" didn`t you?



  


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