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G. A. Webb
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since 2000-01-21
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Stanton, California, USA

0 posted 2000-01-25 10:29 PM


Not long ago once upon a time
I sat myself down to write out this rhyme
About a love that transcends time
Tragic yet elegant and so sublime

I want to kiss you until I die
I have no thoughts or reasons why
That in my heart I always cry
I just want to kiss you until I die

When life is cruel and it's you that it harms
I just want to take you into my arms
To wipe away the pain and all of the tears
And to remove from you your doubts and fears

I want to kiss you until I die
I have no thoughts or reasons why
That in my heart I always cry
I just want to kiss you until I die

Perhaps a day will come to be
When you look around and you will see
That our paths were crossed by destiny
And that you were meant to be with me

I want to kiss you until I die
I have no thoughts or reasons why
That in my heart I always cry
I just want to kiss you until I die

I fantasize with a lighthearted sigh
About the time with me you will lie
I will look you deep straight in the eye
And then I will kiss you until I die

G.A. Webb


© Copyright 2000 G. A. Webb - All Rights Reserved
Candy
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since 2000-01-24
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1 posted 2000-01-25 10:36 PM


i love this poem, Its very sweet.
i feel the same way with a person i love very much. good work

simplyYRREHS
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since 2000-01-03
Posts 162

2 posted 2000-01-25 10:47 PM


Such Melody! I adore this poem.

Sherry

 "Heaven is under our feet as well as over our heads." ~Henry David Thoreau



One Who Understands
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3 posted 2000-01-26 12:54 PM


Beautifull poem.  I love to read poems that flow so well
tulip
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4 posted 2000-01-26 12:54 PM


To have someone feel that way about them must be a wonderful thing!!!
G. A. Webb
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since 2000-01-21
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Stanton, California, USA
5 posted 2000-01-26 01:38 PM


Thank you all. I'm glad you liked it. I just wish that I had somebody like that in my life still. Sadly enough I no longer do, but I'm glad to hear that somebody else out there dose. I wish you all the best and thanks again.

G

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6 posted 2000-01-26 01:41 PM


Wow...... Such love. I was touched deeply. -SEA
Martie
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7 posted 2000-01-26 01:45 PM


So much lovely passion.  I hope it is yours again.
Dolphins3
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8 posted 2000-01-26 02:22 PM


G A  Beautiful poem.  
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