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Candy
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since 01-24-2000
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0 posted 01-25-2000 10:25 PM       View Profile for Candy   Email Candy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Candy

Things never last,
they always seem to pass.
Just as you think everything is ok,
it all goes away.
You cant do anything about it.
It wasn't your choice.
What is there to do after you lose the one
who means the most.
Nothing ever goes right,
everything is wrong.
The person you love is gone.
With the wind he blows away,
He doesn't want to be with you another day
You hold back the tears,
just so he won't hear the thing you fear.
Maybe one day he will return to call my own.
Not to feel stuck,
but just to love.
Its so hard to believe
Theres nothing you can do
But hope that he still truly loves you.

          Candy


© Copyright 2000 Candy - All Rights Reserved
simplyYRREHS
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1 posted 01-25-2000 10:43 PM       View Profile for simplyYRREHS   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for simplyYRREHS

S A L U T A T I O N S and Welcome, Candy.  This is a well-written poem, filled with quite some meaning.  Leaves me feeling a little sad at heart.  I hope that this feeling of "things never last" are not staying with you, as you'll find there are many things of permanence in this world.  Example...the Passions Forum in which you have landed! You'll find no other family online like the people in here.  Look forward to reading more from you.


Sherry

 "Heaven is under our feet as well as over our heads." ~Henry David Thoreau


Denise
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2 posted 01-26-2000 07:37 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Welcome to Passions, Candy! This is a very sad poem.....I hope all your dreams come true! Please check your email for a special welcome!

Denise
minime
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since 01-26-2000
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3 posted 01-26-2000 07:58 PM       View Profile for minime   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for minime

I like your poem!  it was very good!  =)
Severn
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4 posted 01-26-2000 08:03 PM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

Candy - this is so bittersweet. And Sherry has said it all - this is a wonderful family, so WELCOME!



 'Writing sharpens life;
life enriches writing'
Sylvia Plath
Laurel
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since 02-01-2000
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5 posted 02-04-2000 01:20 PM       View Profile for Laurel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Laurel

I guess everyone has gotten a broken heart at least once. This is sad. I hope you find someone who doesn't break your heart!
SEA
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6 posted 02-04-2000 01:55 PM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SEA

Candy, WELCOME! Your poem was so very sad.Touched my heart. I hope it works out.....I'll be looking for more from you!   -SEA
jascanvey
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since 12-26-1999
Posts 130
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7 posted 02-05-2000 10:58 AM       View Profile for jascanvey   Email jascanvey   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for jascanvey

Welcome Candy, what a wonderfully emotional poem to enter with.
Candy
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since 01-24-2000
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8 posted 02-07-2000 12:38 AM       View Profile for Candy   Email Candy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Candy

Thanks for the replys. I have felt very welcomed here. Thanks again.

                    Candy

White Wolf
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Somewhere in the vast wastelan


9 posted 02-07-2000 04:34 AM       View Profile for White Wolf   Email White Wolf   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for White Wolf

Candy- Welcome to passions.  Very nicely written poem.  I can definately relate.  I look forward to reading more of your poetry.

 "Life's greatest mystery isn't the meaning of life. To love and be loved is the meaning of life. Now how to attain those is the greatest mystery of all."

AEYVONNE
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since 02-07-2000
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10 posted 02-07-2000 04:44 AM       View Profile for AEYVONNE   Email AEYVONNE   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for AEYVONNE

Candy that was awesome.  It had alot a meaning.  It really hit home.  I hope you find that love you want.
Sincerely Me
Yvonne
Alias
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since 02-06-2000
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11 posted 02-07-2000 04:54 AM       View Profile for Alias   Email Alias   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alias

i want to say that i really enjoyed your poem and i know how you feel.
I also want to thank everybody here at passions.. you have made me feel very welcome, and i have only been here a couple of days.. thanks everyone.  

Alias
Corazon
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12 posted 02-07-2000 10:39 AM       View Profile for Corazon   Email Corazon   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Corazon

welcome, nice poem!
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