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The breath of dream

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Seymour Tabin
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  The breath of dream

It's the breath of sleep
And the wash of its lay,
The wake of each sweep,
Till it passes away.

The hours recast,
Of minutes refill,
Where time and the past
Are virgin and still.

Where magic takes place
And the heart drinks its fill.
Where the rule is grace
And age has no bill.

Where else can we scheme,
But the breath of each sleep?
Where the wake of a dream,
Is a treasure to reap?

Without this release,
We would soon be at odds.
There would no peace
And there would be no Gods.
                    
© Copyright 2000 Seymour Tabin - All Rights Reserved
Elizabeth Santos
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1 posted 01-25-2000 09:41 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

Sy,
This is so lovely, it took my breath away
Liz
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2 posted 01-25-2000 09:43 PM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SEA

Dreams are magic. This is simply wonderful. I'm glad you shared . -SEA  
HelmutB
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Well done there Sy
Forgive in case I repeat my self here
They say I'm a dreamer, but I'm not the only one" John Lennon.
You sure know how to write a dream


 The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools.

Seymour Tabin
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4 posted 01-26-2000 08:10 AM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Elizabeth,
Thank you and many happy dreams to you. Sy
Sea,
And many happy dreams to you too.
Helmut,
Have a dream on me. Thank you for your comment.
Toerag
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5 posted 01-26-2000 08:19 AM       View Profile for Toerag   Email Toerag   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Toerag

Your breath of sleep,
And of the dream,
Are some of the best,
I've ever seen.

But true breath of sleep,
Is hard to endure,
That's why there's mouthwash,
For that morning-breath cure.
Elizabeth Santos
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6 posted 01-26-2000 08:37 AM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

Hope you don't mind if I reply a second time, but I think this is one of the most beautiful poems I've ever read
Liz
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Lovely Seymore  
RainbowGirl
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8 posted 01-26-2000 09:40 AM       View Profile for RainbowGirl   Email RainbowGirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit RainbowGirl's Home Page   View IP for RainbowGirl

Seymour: I love

"Where else can we scheme,
But the breath of each sleep?
Where the wake of a dream,
Is a treasure to reap?"

HUGS

 Don't ask me where I'm going, just listen when I'm gone and far away you'll hear me singing softly to the dawn.

Nicole
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Beautiful (as always!) and quite lilting, I found myself wishing I had a cot here at work so I could have some dreams of my own.   Great work, Sy.

 May I never be too busy to help another's load,
Then I'll be drinking from the saucer 'cause my cup has overflowed.

--Author Unknown
Seymour Tabin
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10 posted 01-26-2000 04:50 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Toe,
Your always spoofing spooks of death.
No wonder you have bad breath. Sy Thanks
Elizabeth,
Only have one thing to say to you.
Love ya Sy
Hoot,
Well lovely knows lovely. *L* Sy
Rainbow,
You are my rainbow. *L*
Satiate,
Then happy day dreams, thank you Sy
 
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