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Dancing in my dreams

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AngelSamsMom
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0 posted 01-25-2000 08:23 PM       View Profile for AngelSamsMom   Email AngelSamsMom   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit AngelSamsMom's Home Page   View IP for AngelSamsMom

Could you all please tell me if this sounds like a love poem or a poem that was written to a child from its mother????????
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Dancing in my dreams

I closed my eyes tonight
To remember your innocent smile
Could I live this lifetime
In my dreams for awhile
Shadows dancing threw my head
Of a love, long lost beyond
I see your deep blue eyes
Sparkling like the moon’s reflection
I reach my hand out to you
Threw space and time only
To find a mirror of sadness of
The divine
I cant quite reach your open arms
Who could be causing this torture
So unruefully given to me
To the madness only to realize
Its only you dancing threw my dreams
And a true reality that can not be

©Copyrighted January 25, 2000
By Connie D Fields



 My heart will go on, my tears I will cry, My laughter will fade, but for all this I do for the love of Sammy
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1 posted 01-25-2000 08:28 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

I think you probably wrote it for your son, but I could be wrong. It could be written for either, in my opinion. It is very touching and beautiful.  

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2 posted 01-25-2000 08:38 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Connie-
Yes, it's a ~L~O~V~E~ poem.

So much ~L~O~V~E~ from mother to child.
~*Marge*~


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Rosemary J. Gwaltney
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3 posted 01-25-2000 09:22 PM       View Profile for Rosemary J. Gwaltney   Email Rosemary J. Gwaltney   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Rosemary J. Gwaltney's Home Page   View IP for Rosemary J. Gwaltney

It is a beautiful love poem, and the only word that really tells me it's from a mother to a child, is "innocent" - the smile described that way gives it away, that it's to a baby.
Well written, and very haunting and sad.  I've been there too.
Severn
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4 posted 01-25-2000 09:24 PM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

This is just so sad...yet beautiful.



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life enriches writing'
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