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Kevin
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0 posted 2000-01-25 07:07 PM


Every rose with thorns is lined,
to look beyond you must.
Only then are you to find,
the very bonds of trust.


[This message has been edited by Kevin (edited 01-25-2000).]

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Seymour Tabin
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1 posted 2000-01-25 07:12 PM


Kevin,
Short but good.

Denise
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2 posted 2000-01-25 07:15 PM


Short and sweet!  

Denise

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3 posted 2000-01-25 07:26 PM


It's not the roses' beauty
That I lust and trust
I kiss the roses' roots
For roses grow from dust

Nice Poem, Kevin, Keep it up Man

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