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SEA
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0 posted 2000-01-25 06:03 PM



That's not yours
it belongs to me
look closely
and you'll see

You can't have it
it's not for you to take
you're the one who broke it
and left it here to ache

But you've taught me a lesson
one I'll never forget
and getting away from you
I'll never regret.
-SEA-

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Deb Lynne
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1 posted 2000-01-25 06:06 PM


Brief, well-stated, straight to the point! I like!  & I enjoy your work.
SEA
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2 posted 2000-01-25 06:10 PM


Deb, your words of praise are so heartfelt. Thank you.   -SEA
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3 posted 2000-01-25 06:46 PM


Yep, me too! I love short poems that say it all! Well done, SEA!

Denise

White Wolf
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Somewhere in the vast wasteland
4 posted 2000-01-25 06:57 PM


Been there.  Done that.  I know exactly how you feel.  You did a wonderful portrail of that experience.  Keep it up.

 "Life's greatest mystery isn't the meaning of life. To love and be loved is the meaning of life. Now how to attain those is the greatest mystery of all."

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
5 posted 2000-01-25 07:00 PM


Sea,
Short and sweet, good job.

SEA
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6 posted 2000-01-25 07:43 PM


Denise,S.Dragon,Sy........ you makeme feel so good! Thank you for your kind praise. -SEA
Bad Boy
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7 posted 2000-01-25 08:01 PM


Where`s he at?
You point him out and I`ll go get Toe to smack`m a good one
Im glad that your standing up for your self and are able to put all of your feelings in type rather than doing something that would get you in trouble
very nice Sea.

Now let`s talk about you and I
Oh your married? ...never mind.
I guess I`ll have to go find another to flirt with



 The Devil Made Me Do It.


SEA
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8 posted 2000-01-25 08:03 PM


Bad Boy.....you rock! Thanks for the smile sweetie- SEA
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