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Miss Abagail Mannering
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0 posted 01-25-2000 05:55 PM       View Profile for Miss Abagail Mannering   Email Miss Abagail Mannering   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Miss Abagail Mannering

don't you see
why your life's a mess?
don't you see
why you hurt?
don't you see
that there's some things
you can't control?

don't you see
your love is gone?
don't you see
that you were wrong?
don't you see
that some wounds
may not ever mend?

don't you see
the pain you cause?
don't you see
how much they hurt?
don't you see
that your actions
roar far more than words?

don't you see
you can't buy love?
don't you see
why you fail?
don't you see
with lies and abuse
you won't ever prevail?

this was written for someone i know who is usuin' my beau...it was writen on Jan. 25, 2000, my first posted poem of the millenium.


 "Some people aren't worth a puddle of ant pee in the middle of a dessert when it's 100 degrees in the shade." -me

[This message has been edited by Miss Abagail Mannering (edited 01-26-2000).]
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1 posted 01-25-2000 06:14 PM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SEA

Abagail, I love it. Very very good!   -SEA
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People like this may sometimes seem to prevail but they won't forever. Wonderful poem!

Denise
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A gail of hail Abagail, Well done.
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