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Lady of the Lake

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PoeticKnight
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She looks out upon the water
Wondering what ever happened to her
The smell so fresh and wind so cool
Makes her sight so much farther
Little does she know, one exists too,
Her equal, just across the water

Sometimes he thinks of her,
Sometimes she thinks of him

He looks out upon the same blue lake
Wondering what it will take
To be immortal together
A picture they would make
As waves getting wetter
Getting lost in the memory wake

Sometimes he thinks of her,
Sometimes she thinks of him

If only their eyes, lids open could see
Each other waiting distantly
A perfect mirror of one another
Each, a lifetime waiting patiently
Will that time come? they wonder
Would that it could, one day be

Sometimes he thinks of her,
Sometimes she thinks of him

Sometimes itís all she can take
When she becomes,
The lady of the lake


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Ted Reynolds
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1 posted 01-25-2000 02:55 PM       View Profile for Ted Reynolds   Email Ted Reynolds   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Ted Reynolds

Quietly sweet.
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Thanks, Ted. I notice you go to U. Mich...one of my favorite football teams.
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This is hauntingly beautiful, JML! I enjoyed this very much!

Denise
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Thanks so much Denise, I'm sorry I'm not replying on yours, but let me just say how good they are here and everyone's too. I'm glad I found this site...now maybe I can get inspired to get over this writer's block, and post new ones.
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5 posted 01-26-2000 01:31 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

JML-
Man if this is writer's block ...
I want to see what you spin when
the muses come !

Your work has tender and poignant touch.
Admirable.
~*Marge*~



 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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That is so nice of you Marge. I guess, don't we all feel like Garth of Wayne's World when i say..."I'm not worthy!"
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