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opinions please (Two Hearts Bleed as one)

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AngelSamsMom
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0 posted 01-25-2000 02:34 PM       View Profile for AngelSamsMom   Email AngelSamsMom   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit AngelSamsMom's Home Page   View IP for AngelSamsMom

Two Hearts Bleed as one

Pretty blue eyes
With such a beautiful face
Wouldnít you say
Love is such a disgrace

The day you left me I knew
Tears born of regection
So sorry weíre threw

The pain was traped from the tearís I cry
Theres no more love for me
Iíd try if only youíd come
Back to me

So I walk into a ball room
Sit upon a chair
Love songís on the radio
Takes me back to when you where there

I look over my shoulder
The tears they start to fall
And even though you walked out the door
I can still here your loving call

But just before she left
These soft words were said

Like a blade against my heart
Supposen we tried
Right now Iím falling
And its just like I died

And as I close my windowís to the world
Painted pictures in my mind
Iím so sorry to hurt you
But I canít come back this time

I now know the dayís
As I sit up at night
Smoke my last cigerette
My tearís filled with fright
Because now I am nothing
Except what I have become
But even now, I know
Two hearts bleed as one

©Copyrighted January 23, 2000
By Michael W Stimatze




 My heart will go on, my tears I will cry, My laughter will fade, but for all this I do for the love of Sammy
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Anne
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1 posted 01-25-2000 05:14 PM       View Profile for Anne   Email Anne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Anne

Oh, such a sad poem!  There are a few phrases that really stick with me--"Now I am nothing/except what I've become"--I love that!
Great job!  
Denise
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2 posted 01-25-2000 07:25 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Very sad and beautiful. I enjoyed this!

Denise
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