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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA 
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My spirit speaks in the wind My song comes from the birds Many tales I have spinned Some that can't be told by words. My palatte fills the night sky My brush makes them glow Painting pictures only for your eye So you my love will know. My music comes from the heart My Melodies as old as time Sing it with me, my favorite part Says that our hearts are in rhyme. My arms hold you close My hands caress your hair Am I real or a ghost? For it seems I am really there. Am I really a dream? Or am I something real? I am as real as I seem Your heart I've been sent to heal. Close your eyes, my kindred spirit And let your heart be free I'm singing my song, can you hear it? Open your eyes. . . it's me. . . ---------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Your poetry becomes more beautiful with each song you sing Liz |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Very, very nice, Sven. I like this gentle poem. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
A lovely song, Sven! Denise [This message has been edited by dsnyder (edited 01-25-2000).] |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
I hear the beautiful lyrics Sven, I listen when alone and still, We share this boundless kinship, The words only stop when I've had my fill. I sing with you in harmony, Peace and love fill the void, I thank thee for your understanding, Trills and minor chords. Our light is burning stronger, A beacon for all to see, Something to cherish and enjoy, There is nowhere I'd rather be. Thanks for your beautiful gift of song and kinship my dear Sven, my day to day will finish with smiles and songs. (HUGS)  Let your heart guide you. It whispers, so listen closely. ~Isis~ (Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Sven, you've captured a beautiful feeling with this. Claire |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
I agree with Marge - so gentle and tender. Well done. K 'Writing sharpens life; life enriches writing' Sylvia Plath |
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One Who Understands Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 251Cedar Rapids, Iowa |
Very beautiful and sweet. Well written |
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