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Sven
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0 posted 01-25-2000 01:20 PM       View Profile for Sven   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Sven

My spirit speaks in the wind
My song comes from the birds
Many tales I have spinned
Some that can't be told by words.

My palatte fills the night sky
My brush makes them glow
Painting pictures only for your eye
So you my love will know.

My music comes from the heart
My Melodies as old as time
Sing it with me, my favorite part
Says that our hearts are in rhyme.

My arms hold you close
My hands caress your hair
Am I real or a ghost?
For it seems I am really there.

Am I really a dream?
Or am I something real?
I am as real as I seem
Your heart I've been sent to heal.

Close your eyes, my kindred spirit
And let your heart be free
I'm singing my song, can you hear it?
Open your eyes. . . it's me. . .

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 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl

© Copyright 2000 John Garcia - All Rights Reserved
Elizabeth Santos
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1 posted 01-25-2000 01:23 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

Your poetry becomes more beautiful with each song you sing
Liz
Marge Tindal
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2 posted 01-25-2000 01:36 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Very, very nice, Sven.
I like this gentle poem.

~*Marge*~


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Denise
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3 posted 01-25-2000 01:39 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

A lovely song, Sven!

Denise

[This message has been edited by dsnyder (edited 01-25-2000).]
Isis
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4 posted 01-25-2000 06:21 PM       View Profile for Isis   Email Isis   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Isis's Home Page   View IP for Isis

I hear the beautiful lyrics Sven,
I listen when alone and still,
We share this boundless kinship,
The words only stop when I've had my fill.

I sing with you in harmony,
Peace and love fill the void,
I thank thee for your understanding,
Trills and minor chords.

Our light is burning stronger,
A beacon for all to see,
Something to cherish and enjoy,
There is nowhere I'd rather be.

Thanks for your beautiful gift of song and kinship my dear Sven, my day to day will finish with smiles and songs. (HUGS)  

 Let your heart guide you. It whispers, so listen closely.
~Isis~
(Sovereign of the Spirit)

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5 posted 01-25-2000 09:25 PM       View Profile for Meadowmuse   Email Meadowmuse   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Meadowmuse's Home Page   View IP for Meadowmuse

Sven, you've captured a beautiful feeling with this.

Claire
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6 posted 01-25-2000 10:04 PM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

I agree with Marge - so gentle and tender.

Well done.

K


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life enriches writing'
Sylvia Plath
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7 posted 01-26-2000 12:50 AM       View Profile for One Who Understands   Email One Who Understands   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for One Who Understands

Very beautiful and sweet.  Well written
 
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