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In My Life (short but sweet)

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Holden
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Brighton East, Victoria, Austr


0 posted 01-25-2000 08:30 AM       View Profile for Holden   Email Holden   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Holden

If the world stopped turning
& your love stopped yearning,
I would still die a happy man.
If in the end things fall apart
I hope you know in your heart,
& hopefully you'll understand.
My one dream had come true,
In my life I was loved by you.

Too often we are blind to love
& can't see what were thinking of,
So I ask please look at me.
I know life's not always fair
& not everyone tries to care,
But my love is here for you to see.
My favourite dream is of you,
Showing you my love is true.


 'I once picked a daisy's petals searching for an answer. I went through 10 daisy's before getting the answer I was looking for...I love you.'
© Copyright 2000 Jared - All Rights Reserved
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on the threshold of a dream


1 posted 01-25-2000 10:31 AM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

"My one dream had come true, In my life I was loved by you."  (wistful sigh) *S* Beautiful poem, Holden!
spiked
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since 01-13-2000
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Hammond, La USA


2 posted 01-25-2000 10:58 AM       View Profile for spiked   Email spiked   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for spiked

well done Holden
Very expressive
someone is very lucky
tulip
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It sounds as if you are both very lucky!!!
Denise
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4 posted 01-25-2000 01:17 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

A beautiful love poem, very sweet!      

Denise
 
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