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Afterglow

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Marge Tindal
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Afterglow
~Marge Tindal~

In the afterglow of love,
I fell in love again.
The freshness of it all
overwhelming from within.

Not a moment passes,
that you do not reclaim,
the after-the-loving,
afterglow
I am in love again.

Hold me for the second time
within your arms so strong.
A love like this is Heaven-sent.
It will last
long after
the afterglow
is gone.




 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

© Copyright 2000 Marge Tindal - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 01-25-2000 08:09 AM       View Profile for Bad Boy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Bad Boy

You must of had a good night  
Another one with feeling from the heart.
You are one heck of a talented young lady  
Thank`s again for sharing your feelings with us.


  

 The Devil Made Me Do It.



[This message has been edited by Bad Boy (edited 01-25-2000).]
Janet Marie
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I love the feelings this poem decribes.
you write with a warmth that comes thru in your words, very nice. Janet Marie
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3 posted 01-25-2000 11:24 AM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Glowing words, Marge! Simply beautiful!

Denise
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And I thought there was nothing better then afterglow.  Lovely poem, Marge.
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5 posted 01-25-2000 02:35 PM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SEA

Good Gravy Good Lady!!!! My husband will thank you later tonight! Wow!   -SEA
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6 posted 01-25-2000 03:53 PM       View Profile for jfreak   Email jfreak   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for jfreak

Outstanding poem Marge.  Truly beautiful.  I am a hopeless romantic, so you struck a chord with me.

Jfreak
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Janet Marie-
Thank you so much for your thoughts
and comments.

Denise-
My earnest appreciation to you for
being such a loyal reader.

Martie-
You just may be right !
Thank you, lady.

SEA~
LOL !  I'm glad HE liked it !

Jfreak-
Ahhhhh ! An oxymoron with a twist-
if you're 'romantic'
you can't be 'hopeless' !

Thank you for your comments.
~*Marge~



 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Elizabeth Santos
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8 posted 01-25-2000 09:39 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

Beautiful verse, and did you notice how Bad boy gravitates to your lovely poetry. (I think he's softening up a little)
Love ya
Liz
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Dear Marge(y) this is just lovely! So smooth and sensual...great work as usual!

K

 'Writing sharpens life;
life enriches writing'
Sylvia Plath
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I love this, Marge.  Beautifully worded, tender love poem, and just how I feel about my husband!
Also, I've noticed the shapes of your poems lately, and enjoy them very much.
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11 posted 01-25-2000 11:13 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

"The after the loving afterglow"....what a wonderful phrase. Yours must light the morning sky with its brilliance. Wonderful thoughts, Marge.
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12 posted 01-26-2000 01:53 AM       View Profile for HelmutB   Email HelmutB   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit HelmutB's Home Page   View IP for HelmutB

Marge
This is very nice and so romantic
Thank you for such nice poem
Turn off the light to see the afterglow

 The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools.

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Elizabeth, my friend-
So pleased that you found it lovely.

Kamla-
Thank you sweetie.
And thanks again for the picture ...
cutie pie.

Rosemary-
Thank you always for your read.
With such tenderness so evident
between you and Dale ... I'm sure
he feels the same.
Love takes many 'shapes', eh?

Balladeer-
Hello, love ... so glad you enjoyed it.
You always notice just the right things.

Helmut Becker-
Nature does turn off the light each
evening ... then suddenly we are given
one last flicker of the 'afterglow'.
So very glad you liked it.

~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

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14 posted 01-26-2000 09:22 AM       View Profile for WolfsMate   Email WolfsMate   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for WolfsMate

Lovely sentiments. Thank-you for the read.
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I just wanted you to know how your poems and e-mails always leave the spouce and I with a wonderful glow.
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Wonderful words  
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Beautiful Marge, oh how I will miss these wonderful words of yours!  *hugs*

 Just be glad I'm not your child! *evil grin*

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WolfsMate-
Oh, thank you.
I often think that 'sentimental'
is my middle name.

Lucky-
If I send a glow to your hearts,
I feel the warmth in return.

Hoot-
So sweet of you.

Echo-
My thoughts will find their way
to you.
On ~spirits wing~ they fly.
Love ~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

 
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