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Toerag
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0 posted 01-25-2000 07:29 AM       View Profile for Toerag   Email Toerag   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Toerag


Honeydew I love you,
Yes I really do!
You change the color of my day,
When I'm feeling blue.

Punkin Puss yore everthang,
This old heart desires,
You're smoother than my pickup truck,
Ridin' on new tires.

I love ya like a crow does,
His road kill with all it's flaws,
I love you as a crow would,
I guess it's just "becaws"
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Elizabeth Santos
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1 posted 01-25-2000 07:32 AM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

See how mushy these bad boys get after being at passions for a while?
Ahhh, Toe, this is so romantic!
Liz
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2 posted 01-25-2000 07:44 AM       View Profile for Bad Boy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Bad Boy

I have never known anyone to be inspired
to write a poem, from road kill
Even so I have to admit this is better than the last two.
I think it`s time for that beer now
Thank`s for sharing this one Toe.



 The Devil Made Me Do It.

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3 posted 01-25-2000 07:46 AM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

ROFL @ becaws... *G* And what more could anyone want than to be right up there with road kill... appreciated... flaws and all? LOL. Now THAT's romance! *G*
Bad Boy
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4 posted 01-25-2000 07:56 AM       View Profile for Bad Boy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Bad Boy

Im sorry,
I just had to read this again.
Where in the heck did you get the idea for this one? If you dont mind me asking.
This one has brought tear`s to my eye`s.
lmao..If this is what passion does to a man,maybe I should get out while Im able.
lmao
All in fun Toe

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Denise
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5 posted 01-25-2000 12:40 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Now, that's love!  
Iloveit
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6 posted 01-25-2000 12:44 PM       View Profile for Iloveit   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Iloveit

well this is the missing o&o reporting in, great stuff Mr. Toe....thank you for the smiles ROFG....loved all the poems you posted today, and yep, I needed the smiles

[This message has been edited by Iloveit (edited 01-25-2000).]
Martie
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7 posted 01-25-2000 02:16 PM       View Profile for Martie   Email Martie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Martie's Home Page   View IP for Martie

Toe, I knew that under there (where?) somewhere there was a true romatic. Seriously, this was too cute
Toerag
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8 posted 01-25-2000 02:42 PM       View Profile for Toerag   Email Toerag   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Toerag

thanks guys and gals....I hope this at least brought a smile to one or two.....I know things are kinda tough on alotta the folks right now....and my prayers are with ya....if I can bring one smile to one....I know I did something productive today.....Thanks again...
Ted Reynolds
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9 posted 01-25-2000 02:53 PM       View Profile for Ted Reynolds   Email Ted Reynolds   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Ted Reynolds

Toerag, in the most positive and admiring and pleased sense, I find this one just AWFUL . . . like I hope it's supposed to be.  Doing one like this takes skill . . . and guts!
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10 posted 01-25-2000 03:00 PM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SEA

Toe, I have fun reading your work, I also read between the lines. You have a huge heart. Even if you don't want us to see it, I can.(That is more attractive than any snide remark.......you should try it BB) - SEA
Bad Boy
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11 posted 01-25-2000 04:47 PM       View Profile for Bad Boy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Bad Boy

Sea:Snide Remark??
It`s all in fun and im Sure Toe know`s that.
If i`ve offended you in any way Sea, Im sorry.






 The Devil Made Me Do It.

Toerag
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12 posted 01-25-2000 04:52 PM       View Profile for Toerag   Email Toerag   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Toerag

Badboy....I love snide remarks! (And the kind ones too)....but if it weren't for snide remarks, I'd never have learned to love Balladeer and LongJohn?.....LOL
Parker
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... the old black rum


13 posted 01-25-2000 05:07 PM       View Profile for Parker   Email Parker   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Parker's Home Page   View IP for Parker

Toe, Come on up to Toronto old boy, We'll have a drink of good Canadian Beer, (if you can handle it) and we got this here resturant
that serves a dish called Texas Road Kill, I danno maybe they import it eh!.

I live in Winter Wonderland
and danno why I'm here, but
everytime I read some wit of
Toe I need another beer. eh!
eh! That's my beer eh!
Take off eh!.  
RainbowGirl
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14 posted 01-25-2000 05:13 PM       View Profile for RainbowGirl   Email RainbowGirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit RainbowGirl's Home Page   View IP for RainbowGirl

Well, You brought a smile here and I needed it..

HUSG

 Don't ask me where I'm going, just listen when I'm gone and far away you'll hear me singing softly to the dawn.

LngJhnAg
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15 posted 01-25-2000 05:48 PM       View Profile for LngJhnAg   Email LngJhnAg   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for LngJhnAg

Toe - was this first person road kill or first person maker of road kill?  Just asking - once again you have wowed the ladies with a novel approach.
SEA
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16 posted 01-25-2000 07:47 PM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SEA

Bad Boy, I just meant open your heart sweetie! You do not offend me. It would take more than a snide remark to offend me- my Daddy was a sailor- I am my father's daughter!! -   -SEA
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17 posted 01-25-2000 07:55 PM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SEA

Toe, I put a post up here for Bad Boy, I don't see it. Sheesh, I give up. -SEA
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18 posted 01-25-2000 08:10 PM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SEA

Toe this is the thrid message I'm trying to put on here, am I doing something wrong? It shows up on the other screen that I posted but not on here. AHHHHHHHH! -SEA
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19 posted 01-25-2000 08:11 PM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SEA

Ok there they are, I feel stupid now.-SEA
Bad Boy
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20 posted 01-25-2000 08:15 PM       View Profile for Bad Boy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Bad Boy

SEA,
they are showing up
And if I open my heart in here,im afraid
I might never be the same.
But I`ll try

thank`s Sea

Bad Boy



 The Devil Made Me Do It.

WhtDove
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21 posted 01-25-2000 11:20 PM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

ROFLMAO!!! Toe you are so original, just like KFC!!   Love that last line!

 <*\\\><
Where there is faith,
there is love.
Where there is love,
there is peace.
Where there is peace,
there is GOD.
Where there is GOD,
there is no need.

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22 posted 01-25-2000 11:34 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

I can think of no one more qualified to write about road-kill than you, Toe. I noticed that most of the steaks you eat have Goodyear treadmarks across 'em!  
 
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