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I Love You

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cordell pennix
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0 posted 01-24-2000 09:44 PM       View Profile for cordell pennix   Email cordell pennix   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for cordell pennix

                I Love You


My knees start to weaken
At the first sight of your face
My heart starts to melt
At the thought of your embrace

Your love flows through me
Like a river flows down its path
Your kiss lifts me up so high
I could probably fall to my death

I really wish that
When i look into your eyes I could see
Exactly how it is that
You feel about me

I get nervous when you're around me
I feel I could cry when you're away
I dream about you
Every night and day

I want you to know
My last three words will always remain true
Regardless of what I may say or do
You'll always know that
I Love You

To my girl: Lindsey to let her know that i will always and forever love her know matter what happens

                                    Your boyfriend
                                        Cordell
  
© Copyright 2000 cordell pennix - All Rights Reserved
Anne
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1 posted 01-24-2000 09:47 PM       View Profile for Anne   Email Anne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Anne

Lindsey, you're a lucky girl!  

Great poem!  I look forward to seeing more of your work!
Dolphins3
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since 09-30-1999
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2 posted 01-24-2000 09:49 PM       View Profile for Dolphins3   Email Dolphins3   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dolphins3

Cordell, Welcome to Passions. Great first poem posted . She's very lucky to have a guy like you.   I look forward to reading more of your work.
Gene
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since 01-23-2000
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3 posted 01-24-2000 09:53 PM       View Profile for Gene   Email Gene   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Gene's Home Page   View IP for Gene

Welcome, Cordell.

I'm a newbie here too. Great poem! Beautifully written--I like the flow.
----
Gene

First__Knight
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since 11-08-1999
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4 posted 01-24-2000 10:10 PM       View Profile for First__Knight   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for First__Knight

This drips with sweetness

 
I don't buy temporary insanity as they murder defense. Because
people kill people. That's and animal instinct. I think breaking
into someone's home and ironing all their clothes is temporary
insanity.


Denise
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5 posted 01-24-2000 10:52 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Welcome to Passions, Cordell! This is such a beautiful heartfelt expression of your love! Please check your email for a special welcome!

Denise
simplyYRREHS
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6 posted 01-24-2000 11:07 PM       View Profile for simplyYRREHS   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for simplyYRREHS

Endlessly sweet, Cordell.  Welcome to Passions!
Paul Hoekman
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since 12-28-1999
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7 posted 01-25-2000 12:05 AM       View Profile for Paul Hoekman   Email Paul Hoekman   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Paul Hoekman's Home Page   View IP for Paul Hoekman

Keep letting those thoughts
flow from your heart like this
and you will surely keep hers
and win all ours!
VERY NICELY WRITTEN
Welcome!
One Who Understands
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since 01-20-2000
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Cedar Rapids, Iowa


8 posted 01-25-2000 12:32 AM       View Profile for One Who Understands   Email One Who Understands   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for One Who Understands

Wonderful poem, and a wonderful tribute to your girlfriend

With that talent, you will be very welcome here at passions
devina
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since 10-28-1999
Posts 3189
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9 posted 01-25-2000 12:40 AM       View Profile for devina   Email devina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for devina

This is sooo sweet!!!! She's a lucky girl!!! Welcome to passions!!!

 Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...
tracie66
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since 01-18-2000
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10 posted 01-30-2000 06:00 AM       View Profile for tracie66   Email tracie66   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit tracie66's Home Page   View IP for tracie66

Cordell a very romantic poem I really enjoyed reading it... Tracie  
Little_Spyro
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since 01-09-2000
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11 posted 01-30-2000 06:06 AM       View Profile for Little_Spyro   Email Little_Spyro   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Little_Spyro

Romance...
Now there's a subject I have a hard time working with...even though [I grudgingly admit after writing a lot of poems and getting responses like "excellent" and "you're a great poet""] I'm a good poet...

But you seem to have hit the spot!

Great work, cordell!  

Little Spyro T. Dragon
Buffpimp
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12 posted 01-30-2000 09:58 AM       View Profile for Buffpimp   Email Buffpimp   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Buffpimp

VERY NICE POEM!  Even though I did read this before  .  I loved it TONS and thats why I remember I read it somewhere else  .  Keep up the good work
Alina Le Ann
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13 posted 01-31-2000 06:14 PM       View Profile for Alina Le Ann   Email Alina Le Ann   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Alina Le Ann's Home Page   View IP for Alina Le Ann

This is a great poem!!!
I have those exact feelings for the love of my life and I'm so glad that somebody could find a way to put those feelings into words as beautifully as you did!!!
hoot_owl_rn
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since 07-05-99
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Glen Hope, PA USA


14 posted 01-31-2000 10:09 PM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

She should love this. Welcome to passions  
The Haunted Poet
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since 01-24-2000
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Sumner Washington


15 posted 02-01-2000 12:33 AM       View Profile for The Haunted Poet   Email The Haunted Poet   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for The Haunted Poet

Simply put...... You're the man!!!! Good poem!!! And watch out for the fall after the kiss..... sometimes it may be too high! Just kidding!
mariee66
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since 01-30-2000
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16 posted 02-01-2000 12:40 AM       View Profile for mariee66   Email mariee66   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for mariee66

Well... don't think I could top your vision of love~

How very romantic~

Marie~
 
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