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Seymour Tabin
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       Sys sea gull

Sea gulls glide in freedom,
Plumbing wind and carefree.
Using all their instincts,
To stay in perigee.

Their graceful overfly,
Advantageous forfeit.  
We thrill in admiration,
The fulfill of the debit.

It's only seriousness.
The hardness of the stay
Whose antics are a wonder
But his belly drives the way.

Freedom is a hardship
Cruel and mostly underfed.
And if I were a sea gull,
I'd drop one on your head.
© Copyright 2000 Seymour Tabin - All Rights Reserved
Anne
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LOL!
Quite an ending you've got there!  
Heads up!
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I love seagulls, but they do a number on the old car's paint job.  Your poem tickled me
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LOL@the last line!!! Damn SY, hate to know who inspired this one...but being the nosy girl I am...just go ahead and tell me purdy please????

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4 posted 01-25-2000 02:11 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal



Seymour-
That is SOOOOOOOOOOOOO FUNNY !
~Marge~



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5 posted 01-25-2000 06:40 AM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

Sounds as though someone was standing in the wrong place at the wrong time! LOL. Enjoyed the poem, Seymour... bombs away! *G*
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Sy
Thank you for the laugh
You brighten my day
Liz
Seymour Tabin
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7 posted 01-25-2000 07:57 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Anne, Glad you liked the end.

Martie, A tickle is worth a laugh.

Devina, Well I was honored the other day at the shore.

Marge, Your comment was soooooooo good. *L*

Suthern, Well something went away. *L*

Elizabeth, Any laugh is a good laugh. Love Sy
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Oh, Sy, this is soooo funny!!

Denise
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OK Seymour,
Me think`s you`ve been reading too many of Toe`s writing`s
Thank you for the laugh






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Sy Sy SY!!! ROTF....



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life enriches writing'
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What should I say, is there anything I can add
The live of a seagull must be sad
So please if you happen to fly by
Please drop your load over onto the next guy
LOL
Loved it

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12 posted 01-26-2000 08:19 AM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Denise,
THe sound of laughter is wonderful. *L*
Bad boy,
I told them to go and visit Toe. Thanks
Severn,
A laugh a day keeps the doctor away. *L*
Helmut,
I gave them the names of all the poets, expect a visit. Sy
 
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