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A Post From My Son

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simplyYRREHS
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0 posted 01-24-2000 09:15 PM       View Profile for simplyYRREHS   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for simplyYRREHS

*I am resting my quill today.  After a very stressful afternoon, my seven year old retreated to his bedroom after school.  A few minutes later, he returned with a creative drawing, on that horrid manilla school paper, and a poem attatched.  He wanted to cheer "mom" by sharing a poem, as he knows how much I enjoy escaping into this poetry haven.  I was very touched by his effort and consideration as to what seems to make me smile these days.  Just sharing.  Great start for my chip off the ole block. I did not correct his 2nd grade spelling, by the way.  Enjoy. ~Sherry


"God Bless Amarica"
     by Drake

Amaracans fout and that is how we were made.
They are stong and brave.
This day we stile have solders that fite in wars so we can be free.
We shold thank them
and that is the way it shold be.
© Copyright 2000 Sherry - All Rights Reserved
Bad Boy
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1 posted 01-24-2000 10:55 PM       View Profile for Bad Boy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Bad Boy

GOOD JOB DRAKE
Mabey you can give me some pointer`s?
If you keep writing maybe Mom will let you get your own name for passion?


Bye Bye Little Buddy




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Denise
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2 posted 01-24-2000 10:59 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

This is a wonderful poem, Drake! Well done!
That was so sweet of you to cheer Mommy up like that with your poem. We like that!  

Sherry- Please check your email for a surprise for Drake!

Denise

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Gene
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3 posted 01-24-2000 11:12 PM       View Profile for Gene   Email Gene   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Gene's Home Page   View IP for Gene

I've been touched by an angel.  

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Gene
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4 posted 01-25-2000 01:04 AM       View Profile for One Who Understands   Email One Who Understands   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for One Who Understands

Yes it is buddy!

You write wonderful poems
 
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