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Guitar Man

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kitkat
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0 posted 01-24-2000 07:09 PM       View Profile for kitkat   Email kitkat   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for kitkat

Title
Guitar Man


Hey my guitar man strum some chords for me
let your finger move on those strings as I
imagine them moving across my soul.

Hey my guitar man the tone you play
Is it real? or just my fantasy of you,
sitting in a field of wildflowers gazing in my eyes.

You move me with your music so loud and strong
but yet with every motion of your hand
you move my emotion to a higher ground

Hey my guitar man set me apart
from all the others hearing you
for I am the listener of your heart

 You got to get up every morning with a smile on your face
and show the world all the love in your heart
Then people are gonna treat you better
You're gonna find, yes you will
That your beautiful as you feel. Carol King

© Copyright 2000 Kathy Harmon - All Rights Reserved
Denise
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1 posted 01-24-2000 08:53 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

This is lovely, Kitkat! Beautiful music!

Denise
Anne
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I like it!  Nicely done!  
CrazyChick
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Great Work!!!!!
Paul Hoekman
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Nothing prettier than
the sound of heart strings
being played. Well done!
You just played a chord on mine.
Poetic Sadness
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since 01-15-2000
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5 posted 01-25-2000 12:13 AM       View Profile for Poetic Sadness   Email Poetic Sadness   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Poetic Sadness's Home Page   View IP for Poetic Sadness

Great poem, kitkat, I enjoyed it a lot. I really liked the last verse, reminds me of many guys that I've fallen for. Ah, all the guitar men that draw us in...Congrats.

Heather

 The things you fear are undefeatable not by their nature, but by your approach.
-Jewel
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Wonderful poem
 
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