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SEA
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0 posted 2000-01-24 05:41 PM



The kids are in bed
What shall it be,
a movie, a game,
or a dance with me?!

I see that twinkle-
I know what's on your mind,
as you guide me to the porch
touching my behind.

Slowly you undress me
What will the neighbors think?
What will they see?

......Softly you say to me.........
In the moonlight,shadows dancing........
-SEA-

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Bad Boy
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1 posted 2000-01-24 05:49 PM


Oh YEA
Now this is my kind of poetry
If they would let me in the Adult room I would be Oh SO HAPPY
Thank you for the vision.
Now I think I`ll go shower



SEA
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2 posted 2000-01-24 05:52 PM


Why thank you Bad Boy.........I think.   -SEA
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3 posted 2000-01-24 07:25 PM


I like this! Romantic.....  

Martie
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4 posted 2000-01-24 07:43 PM


I enjoyed reading this Sweet and romantic  poem, Sea.
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5 posted 2000-01-24 07:47 PM


(taking notes)

Yep -- think this would be good -- very good in fact!    And what a precious poem!

--Kess


 Full fathom five thy father lies,
Of his bones are coral made,
Those are pearls that were his eyes;
Nothing of him that doth fade
But doth suffer a sea-change
Into something rich and strange...


--William Shakespeare, from The Tempest


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6 posted 2000-01-24 07:50 PM


SEA: "What will they see?"  The look of love, I think..

HUGS

 Don't ask me where I'm going, just listen when I'm gone and far away you'll hear me singing softly to the dawn.


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7 posted 2000-01-24 07:51 PM


YA!Poet, Martie, Skyfyre, SOOOO glad you liked this. Thank you - SEA  
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8 posted 2000-01-24 08:10 PM


"Oh, no......hurry up, hide, here come the kids! I thought you said they were sleeping"....hehehehe  

This was adoreable, SEA! Challenge well met!

Denise

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9 posted 2000-01-24 09:40 PM


Well, now dancing in the moonlight naked...that's a new twist on it and one I may perhaps have to try out
Challange well met Sea  

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10 posted 2000-01-24 09:45 PM


Great poem SEA , You have to try it in the rain though. LOL  
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11 posted 2000-01-25 01:20 AM


Sea-
This is absolutely adorable !
Tee Hee ...
~Marge~


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12 posted 2000-01-25 01:31 AM


Enjoyed this one SEA.  
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13 posted 2000-01-25 01:34 AM


SEA....how sweetly romantic!! This was beautiful. What the neighbors think doesn't matter in the face of love.

 Poetry~ Words falling on paper, painting a dream.

Shawna R. Holder
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14 posted 2000-01-25 04:53 AM


What a lovely romantic poem. Hope you had fun

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You got to get up every morning with a smile on your face
and show the world all the love in your heart
Then people are gonna treat you better
You're gonna find, yes you will
That your beautiful as you feel.~~~ Carol King



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