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In the moonlight,shadows dancing(thought I'd give it a spin)

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SEA
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0 posted 01-24-2000 05:41 PM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for SEA


The kids are in bed
What shall it be,
a movie, a game,
or a dance with me?!

I see that twinkle-
I know what's on your mind,
as you guide me to the porch
touching my behind.

Slowly you undress me
What will the neighbors think?
What will they see?

......Softly you say to me.........
In the moonlight,shadows dancing........
-SEA-
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1 posted 01-24-2000 05:49 PM       View Profile for Bad Boy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Bad Boy

Oh YEA
Now this is my kind of poetry
If they would let me in the Adult room I would be Oh SO HAPPY
Thank you for the vision.
Now I think I`ll go shower


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2 posted 01-24-2000 05:52 PM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SEA

Why thank you Bad Boy.........I think.   -SEA
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3 posted 01-24-2000 07:25 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

I like this! Romantic.....  
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4 posted 01-24-2000 07:43 PM       View Profile for Martie   Email Martie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Martie's Home Page   View IP for Martie

I enjoyed reading this Sweet and romantic  poem, Sea.
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5 posted 01-24-2000 07:47 PM       View Profile for Skyfyre   Email Skyfyre   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Skyfyre

(taking notes)

Yep -- think this would be good -- very good in fact!    And what a precious poem!

--Kess


 Full fathom five thy father lies,
Of his bones are coral made,
Those are pearls that were his eyes;
Nothing of him that doth fade
But doth suffer a sea-change
Into something rich and strange...


--William Shakespeare, from The Tempest

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6 posted 01-24-2000 07:50 PM       View Profile for RainbowGirl   Email RainbowGirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit RainbowGirl's Home Page   View IP for RainbowGirl

SEA: "What will they see?"  The look of love, I think..

HUGS

 Don't ask me where I'm going, just listen when I'm gone and far away you'll hear me singing softly to the dawn.

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YA!Poet, Martie, Skyfyre, SOOOO glad you liked this. Thank you - SEA  
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"Oh, no......hurry up, hide, here come the kids! I thought you said they were sleeping"....hehehehe  

This was adoreable, SEA! Challenge well met!

Denise
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Well, now dancing in the moonlight naked...that's a new twist on it and one I may perhaps have to try out
Challange well met Sea  
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10 posted 01-24-2000 09:45 PM       View Profile for Dolphins3   Email Dolphins3   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dolphins3

Great poem SEA , You have to try it in the rain though. LOL  
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11 posted 01-25-2000 01:20 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Sea-
This is absolutely adorable !
Tee Hee ...
~Marge~


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12 posted 01-25-2000 01:31 AM       View Profile for Eloise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Eloise

Enjoyed this one SEA.  
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13 posted 01-25-2000 01:34 AM       View Profile for PhaerieChild   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for PhaerieChild

SEA....how sweetly romantic!! This was beautiful. What the neighbors think doesn't matter in the face of love.

 Poetry~ Words falling on paper, painting a dream.

Shawna R. Holder
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14 posted 01-25-2000 04:53 AM       View Profile for kitkat   Email kitkat   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for kitkat

What a lovely romantic poem. Hope you had fun

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You got to get up every morning with a smile on your face
and show the world all the love in your heart
Then people are gonna treat you better
You're gonna find, yes you will
That your beautiful as you feel.~~~ Carol King


 
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