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The Reason

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jfreak
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Yuma, AZ, USA


0 posted 01-24-2000 02:01 PM       View Profile for jfreak   Email jfreak   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for jfreak

An eternity of time
That they do not see
All are blind leading blind
Towards further bondage and misery
Mountains will move
with just a simple seed
But we must spread the mustard
If they are to taste their need
Few and very far between
And I'm still sitting here
While many have not yet seen
My Lord so very dear
So I drip my tears
Like wet concrete
to abound my fear
Encased are my feet
Then I see my need
For the red letters
Which then frees my keep
for all the beggars
Which are blessed in due time
by Him who makes all well
He who sits at the right
Who took our three nails
He is the reason for my prescence
In this distant land
For me to spread his essence
And just to be his hands

© Copyright 2000 jfreak - All Rights Reserved
Paul Hoekman
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1 posted 01-24-2000 02:10 PM       View Profile for Paul Hoekman   Email Paul Hoekman   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Paul Hoekman's Home Page   View IP for Paul Hoekman

Really wonderful jfreak
and just realized what your
name means.So I know are Spirit
is one in the same.
and are hearts are in the same place.
Balladeer
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2 posted 01-24-2000 05:59 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

Yes, he is ,Paul, and he lives up to his name well. A good man with a good message.

Nice to see you around, J!
jfreak
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3 posted 01-24-2000 06:10 PM       View Profile for jfreak   Email jfreak   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for jfreak

nice to be back ballad.  Thanks for the compliments.

Jfreak
Denise
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4 posted 01-24-2000 06:14 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Welcome back, Jfreak! Long time no see! Wonderful poem! Hope you hang around here for a while! Say, did you get a chance to check out the new 'Spiritual' forum?! Great stuff in there!  

Denise
jfreak
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5 posted 01-25-2000 01:51 AM       View Profile for jfreak   Email jfreak   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for jfreak

No Denise I haven't had a chance to see all the new gizmos the forums have.  I am kind of lost.  Like going home to find the house totally renovated.  Nan and the guys have done a wonderful job making this what is from what it was in the beginning.  It is just nice to be back.  Like I said, like being home.  Look forward to more great poetry.  Thanks "D" for the warm welcome back.  We are all truly a family.

Jfreak

 
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6 posted 01-25-2000 07:10 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Jfreak-
There is a poignant message in
this piece.
Very, very well done.

~Marge~


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jfreak
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7 posted 01-25-2000 03:51 PM       View Profile for jfreak   Email jfreak   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for jfreak

Thanx Marge,

that is exactly what I was hoping it would be.

Jfreak
 
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